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If you want to create a good webtoon than take lessons from this author. I'm not talking about the story, but about the way this is drawn. How she/he organizes the panels, the images, the bubbles with the dialogue - it's such an enjoyable read. There are so many webtoons out there which cause me a headache with of all that DAMN unnecessary scrolling, because there is just nothing on the page! I'm serious here, I get dizzy. But Team KillerWhale does it just right. Sorry, the rant ends here.
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Here is chapter 2 in English. It's an UNOFFICIAL translation. I did it myself, because I love this manga. I used the portuguese scanlations from yaoi150. I didn't translate noises and moods, because I don't have the time for cleaning. I just did it for fun, so don't come at me. Thank you! https://www.dropbox.com/sh/31snl8gy46nhx1l/AACwjrJmbyGJ8fnunK_nnh_xa?dl=0
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This is a rather realistic approach which I like. But it also makes you think about the meaning of love (in general and for gay people in particular). If those two will get together then it's mostly because the sex feels good. Which is okay, I'm not judging. But there is this prejudice that for gay people love is all about sex and in this story it's shown pretty clearly especially with McQueen's character that being gay is mostly about having (good) gay sex. I mean, why not? Just saying that the realism is hitting you hard in this story. Btw the sex scene was great.
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Here are the next nine pages in English. Look at the reply to see them.
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Not a perfect translation/scanlation, but well ...
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I cannot believe how bad this is. The characters are over the top, their stories and relationships boring like hell, the humor not funny at all. Not to mention that I have a hard time telling them apart (there are just too many!). The author's other works are so captivating, the characters feel real, the art style is nice. You immediately get drawn into the story. But this one? I'm speechless that they even made an anime.
She started this manga without serious intentions and as a hobby on Pixv. After it's success that it became more official, that's why it's different and a lot of people actually enjoy it just like that.
In some way I agree, especially if you compare it to other Ogeretsu Tanaka work. It lacks proper plot and structures, having too many characters syndrome, story feels like it jumps over from one character to another too quickly, which caused lots of build up to be lost. It is really baffling that this was chosen to be animated over her other works.
Though, i suppose, of all her works, this also stands out as being the most unique and ridiculous. Some people like it enough for having lots and lots bishonen and smut, and dozen of potential couplings. Some plots are still being developed, so maybe some characters will receive proper character development.
It is a mess for now, and I am still reading it coz it does have a weird charm. As long as I dont take it too seriously, it is an okay read.