I will start updating tomorrow (If everything goes well)
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I feel like the author should've done one of two things to make this story likable. 1. Have kageyama r*pe hinata (I don't say this is ok both in real or a fake world) and have hinata distance himself a lot from Kags to were kags reflects bout what he did. And at the end of the story have him feeling bad for both himself and hinata. No more sex scenes after the r*pe scene. Or
2. Make this an alpha-omega verse (again even if it was in that universe it still wouldn't be ok) but this storyline didn't make any sense.
in this story it's basically, We got kageyama having these feelings for hinata which leads to him r*ping him. But after r*ping the poor dude a few days go by, he says sorry and magically hinata isn't afraid to have sex anymore. That makes no sense both realistically or fictionally. Oh and the fact that after he r*pped he confessed to him also makes zero sense. Why didn't he just confess to him before doing the dirty deed? Him confessing to him after the whole r*pping can kinda cause a sort of light Stockholm syndrome. Oh and there was no sense in adding suga, it seemed the author wanted to use him as a type of shining light, but ended up making seemed like he didn't mind the fact that kage R*APED Hinata and instead encouraged Kage to speak with hinata. Like dude u said you'd the him away from Kage if he hurt him, like what does hurting mean if it isn't being r*aped by someone you trusted and loved as a friend?!
Again it would've been better if Hinata refused to love Kage back, would've been a bit more realistic and dramatic. This author is either a newbie in this genre (which I doubt from all their other work they've done), or is just too lazy to create good story since these aren't her characters.
But to make this more realistic Hinata should've just reported Kage.
Ok that's the end of my incoherent rant.
Have a nice day/night y'all!!!! :)
I'm usually not one to compare different works with one another but while I was reading the first few panels I was thinking that it was similar to bnha, was about to exit the tab with out finishing but once I finished it, it left me wanting for more chapters!! This seems promising and hopefully will be able to create it's own reputation within the hero trope/genre. So far I fucking hate the light haired twin brother. Will be cheering for Hiiro!!!