I went into the comments to confirm whether my tired ass was seeing shit no i didn't imagine myself reading admist of a sex scene that the author is Dead... Omg, nay they rest in piece
I mean its short and good. Id rather have a short story that is just that, rather than wasting time on a longer story. Though i do smell potential here, and it would be much more impactful if its longer, still they're cute together and i get to live through my ship dynamics, so I'm really happy with this story. Still preferring this short but nice story than a story that not only wasted my time, but also my happiness.
My man was ready to chop off his crushes love of the life bc she prolly dead and void blames blast for it. But like com'on, seriously? That shit some crazy gymnastics. But anyways SAITAMA
My guy, thats not envy, thats jealousy
that's what I thought too but what if it was envy because Adam was going out with Isaiah at the time Eve was born?? just a theory..
also born sounds weird but I meant created*
No happy dates, no happy sex??? Aaaaaaaa plsssss i need the fluff after the angst ejdjekfkekkdkfke
Fucked up, but good in a fucked up sense. The plot is interesting with a bit of those horny obsession shit happening and im eating it up, knowing full well im going to hell too The trauma felt raw and the incest part felt like a part of the story in a way. Like with how fucked up everything else is, the incest just added to the whole theme. I probably won't ever be reading smth like this again, even though i hate dark shit, this took me on a rollercoaster that is once in my life time. Its good enough to make me want to reread it, but also... I think thats enough psychological torture for me... Still, id recommend this story to anyone that can stomach dark psychological stories. Because as dark and twisted as it is, there is a certain masterpiece to it thats hard to describe lol.
Ok, i just want to say that i kinda wish that ML takes responsibility not just for the child but also for MC, bc it won't sit with me right when the story ends with MC forgiving ML without the ML do anything to gain the forgiveness. Its one thing to be worried about the child, who is also his child, vut another to express guilt and apologizes to the MC that got hurt and had to suffer the 5 years through hell. If ML doesn't do anything that's putting his arrogant pride aside and actually realizes that if he truly cared, he would apologize to the MC.
I might be the only one wishing that in a horny bl, but i enjoy toxic BL best, when the story also carries its weight. I just don't enjoy a story where the ML is an asshole with no real redeeming qualities.
Not saying MC is completely innocent, but thats another discussion, since jts getting messy when ML is starting to force himself on MC and leave him wirh no choice and also immediately start to sleep with him.
I'm more annoyed at how helpless MC is and i also want MC to bite back instead of being on the receiving end, no pun intended lol
Remember our goal isn't to see which side gets their revenge, but when they gonna get together
I wish they all made up and live happily ever after. And mainly for the threesome. I want the threesome
As of rn I don't approve any man to be the right ml. But its so obvious its the black haired dude. Which he choke on his rude ass. Tho the pink guy isn't any better, imo I'd be pissed to be dragged around like that, especially if it means to leave someone defenseless behind...
I wish the author would focus on one ml and write the romance around it. I found i prefer stories where the main couple gets the biggest focus to be so much better than stories where you have to divide your Focus between multiple bf's. Bc its so much easier to write an amazing story around one couple (their weakness, strength, character development, past) than if you have to go into other love interest as well, knowing who the main ship is... Sigh.... And that also means less time for girlie to find about the modern life. These scenes are the funniest