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can someone tell me what's the name of mahwa that the fl has black hair and she's a maid and the ml has white hair but unfortunately the fl was transferred to another house that's why the white haired ml were finding her for 4 years?
Maybe "The lady I served became the young master"..?
While constructive criticism is acceptable, whining and complaining about the story when you are an illegal reader who does not contribute to the author's salary clearly shows how ungrateful you are. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Personally I liked the story. It was dark and had mature themes (not everything is going to be sunshine and ponies) so people complaining about that baffles me. Like are they incapable of seeing a different perspective? It even has a psychological theme! I see many complaints precisely because they don't like how this perspective conflicts with their own world narrative. That pisses me off.
On a side note, I do think the ending was a bit flat and the climax could have used some more work.