The premise of this was so cool when it started, but the Mc makes the weirdest choices and the other characters around him are developed weirdly and at some point I wasn't rooting for anyone, not even the Mc because he was royally screwing uo this whole god thing. Idk... （￣へ￣）
it started out as a fun pwp story but the author decided to add serious and heavy plot lmao. don't get why so many authors do that, we only care because of the smut, plot and personality wise there isn't any real romance in here whatsoever
Eehhhh...somethings wrong.
This is too easy and he got over everything mad fast.........something's wrong.
Denial is a river in Egypt. That man is Nayria.
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Oh Chaheon, you're so Fine!
Oh Narye, you're so Fine!
Okay but why?
There was legit no lead up to the rape scene it just happened out of nowhere and felt completely out of place on top of already being unnecessary.(￣∇￣")
Staying for the plot, cause I do wanna know what the man is but beyond that, I'll likely drop this nonsense soon. They have no chemistry and if a relationship comes of this, it would be ridiculous and unnatural.
Am I supposed to start liking the old man as a recurring character? Because the fact he ain't get is a** beat after stealing the void oil from dem kids is criminal and I don't care what he has to offer either of them. I hate him.
Also the plot is feeling slow now. And it's getting uninteresting in contrast to how it started. I feel we been stuck in the same place for like 17 chapters now.
I hope it starts moving a bit soon
FACTS!! I want them to leave the shit hole already I want more father and daughter moments and we are barely getting any
Okay....I just a Lil tired by the Uke. He's practically a synonym for naive, gullible and stupid. From the very beginning, if a weird wealthy man started flirting with me in the most outrageous way, I would dip quick and y would u trust a person who was capable of breaching ur program???? I just don't understand how the Mc thinks. He's so.........meh.
Yea, but it’s more than likely bc he didn’t care since he had his whole head wrapped around his goal on finding B and screw him over the way B did to him. At least I’m hoping it’s like that bc it’s the most reasonable thing I could think of why his behavior of being oblivious was-
Mmmmmm, imma let this marinate a Lil.
I like the premise.(▰˘◡˘▰)
AFTER EVERYTHING HE PUT YOU THROUGH!
HAVING YOUR WHOLE FAMILY OFFED AND PUTTING YOU IN A POSITION WHERE YOU ARE FORCED TO SLEEP WITH AN OLD MAN, ONLY TO LIE TO YOU EVERYDAY ABOUT WHAT HES DONE BECAUSE "HE LOVES U" AND THEN WHEN YOU FIND OUT, IMPRISONS YOU BECAUSE "HE CANT LIVE WITHOUT YOU" BULLSHIT.
YOU STILL PICK HIM!?!?!?!?
WHY?!?!?!
WHEN THERE SEXY SNOWMAN TO PLOW U THAT HAS LITERALLY NEVER DONE ANYTHING WRONG TO U AND WANTS TO SAVE YOU????
IM SO MAD RN.
THE DICK CAN. NOT. BE. THAT. GOOD.
AINT NO WAY!(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I don't like the ml....and I like the Mc but does he not know how to...like.....fight?
What am I reading rn?
He can't throw punches or stab people properly?
All this talk and my man does not fight back against a whole person....violating him against his will.
I just.....don't... （￣へ￣）
Maybe I'm not the target audience for dis.
i dont like the ml too. the reason mc is not fighting him yet is because he needs him in his master plan.
you and me both...
He still likes him after remembering?!?!?!
Could not be me fam because he sucked. Omg
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Both the brother and him sucked, I would be big mad if he started liking me back cause I'm different or I'm his only peace now that he's lost everything else because he wasn't even that nice when u were alive??
What did u like about him????
The “nah fam” at the top got me cracking up lol but yea I get what u mean Vince ain’t allat