I will say the blonde hair character is definitely charming and I enjoy his somewhat childish personality and I also enjoy the world building and relationship he has with the MC(I dont support everything he does realisticly i enough the dynamic and drama). What I don't like is that it's all going to be thrown away because the mpreg, surprisingly I genuinely didnt suspect the mpreg of Mc because I (and maybe other readers) were so focused on the world building. Okay now let's say gun to the creators head they HAD to add mpreg, but why so soon? If the creator wanted to add mpreg why not further the world bulding to where it isn't a interesting or huge plot point anymore by having a few more chapters were we see more of the world, it's mysterious creatures and how the characters interact with each other within the world. I don't mind the mpreg personally I'm just disappointed that we won't be able to see the characters interact the same way they did before I feel as if everything is going to be watered down. (03/31/2025 edit!!!!) I also just wanted to add the reason why I'm so focused on the world building is because that's really the only way we see Kay's true personality. In reality Kay is quite a boring character compared to the male lead but I will admit I did enjoy him more when he wasn't interacting with anyone. I feel as if the world really allowed us, the readers to follow along and understand Kay's feelings and actions. Essentially the world building was a good plot device to push conflict and introduce new plot points, especially for Kay and now that it's going to be removed Kay is going to be completely outshined by the male lead and fade into the background. I'm not saying I'm going to drop this because I've read it 3 times already but I will say my expectations won't be the same.
Idc if you're and adult or minor If you're reading this and think it's okay for a grown man to draw two children in a sexual manner you're disturbing. Yes stuff like this happens in real life between people under the age of 18 but it's still shouldn't be shown because they're still CHILDREN and I'm saying this as a 17 year old. Even though the creator makes up for this in his most recent works this is Manga is still disturbing.
Tbh at first I didn't think much of this story but as I read more and more I got really pissed off. Personally I didn't care if the Mc and the male lead had sex or not I just hated that half their relationship was a "will they fuck or won't they?" I also hate how stupid they make the Mc. Don't get me wrong they don't have to write the MC to be a know it all it's interesting to have the MC draw his own conclusions at the situations that are presented to him it's just that he tackles them in the WORST way ever. Not only that he seems to really have no personality besides the fact that he's an S rank guide and doesn't want to have sex. Going back to the male lead I genuinely have no problems with him I like his personality and carisma and how his attitude bounces off the other characters. It's genuinely just the male lead that I have a problem with, I don't like the fact that he's clueless all the time and does the same think for 45 chapters. And his relationship with the male lead also falls apart because let's be honest we both know the male lead doesn't really love the Mc per say but is just fascinated by then and honestly that would've been fine if they wrote the MC better. Idk for me it's just like everything is out in the open but the Mc will still looking inside if that makes sense. The story has interesting characters and world building but that doesn't matter if the character we have to see 90% of the time doesn't adjust and understand any of it.
Tbh at first I didn't think much of this story but as I read more and more I got really pissed off. Personally I didn't care if the Mc and the male lead had sex or not I just hated that half their relationship was a "will they fuck or won't they?" I also hate how stupid they make the Mc. Don't get me wrong they don't have to write the MC to be a know it all it's interesting to have the MC draw his own conclusions at the situations that are presented to him it's just that he tackles them in the WORST way ever. Not only that he seems to really have no personality besides the fact that he's an S rank guide and doesn't want to have sex. Going back to the male lead I genuinely have no problems with him I like his personality and carisma and how his attitude bounces off the other characters. It's genuinely just the male lead that I have a problem with, I don't like the fact that he's clueless all the time and does the same think for 45 chapters. And his relationship with the male lead also falls apart because let's be honest we both know the male lead doesn't really love the Mc per say but is just fascinated by then and honestly that would've been fine if they wrote the MC better. Idk for me it's just like everything is out in the open but the Mc will still looking inside if that makes sense. The story has interesting characters and world building but that doesn't matter if the character we have to see 90% of the time doesn't adjust and understand any of it.
I've already posted a comment talking about how the author is weird for shipping characters that they wrote with a CLEAR father and son dynamic in an alternative universe but this comment is more gor the fans who keep fighting with people who have similar opinions to mine. You guys keep telling us to drop it but not all of us are reading the story for those alternate universe chapters but still it's so strange that the author write those kind of chapters with the exact same characters. Even though throughout the alternate universe chapters nothing sexual happens there's still a lot of....interesting intimate moments between the two characters that a father and son wouldn't have. So I ask why do YOU people think it's okay for an author to basically write a borderline incestuous side story with extra steps. Last time I had someone respond to my comment saying "The author is getting hate they have to!" Let's be so for real, they're a WHOLE adult and can simply just risk losing that side of their fan base that is into that.
I definitely can say that this is on of my favorite BL stories it's not just top and bottom MC fucking all day and even though it started off like that in the beginning it actually wasn't bad compared to most BL. I love how the story has world building and character building as well (I wanna say Ken is apart of character building but they changed him a lot especially how he appears physical aka they basically made him a twink even though he already was pretty twinkish but in my opinion they made it look more weird.) I don't really agree with some of the comments talking about character flaws even thought it's apart of the story and what make it interesting, I just think if you can't handle character PERSONALITY flaws then maybe this isn't for you cause half the story is about flaws and trauma
I definitely can say that this is on of my favorite BL stories it's not just top and bottom MC fucking all day and even though it started off like that in the beginning it actually wasn't bad compared to most BL. I love how the story has world building and character building as well (I wanna say Ken is apart of character building but they changed him a lot especially how he appears physical aka they basically made him a twink even though he already was pretty twinkish but in my opinion they made it look more weird.) I don't really agree with some of the comments talking about character flaws even thought it's apart of the story and what make it interesting, I just think if you can't handle character PERSONALITY flaws then maybe this isn't for you cause half the story is about flaws and trauma
SOMEBODY PLEASE TELL ME THE MC STOPS BEING SO STUPID PLEASE I DONT CARE IF ITS A SPOILER
Atp I wish the mc would die and idk come back with some character development cause like story wise he is honestly better off dead.
Not to be rude but based off the translations it seems like English isn't your first language and if it is I recommend that you work harder on your translations/editing before uploading. I recommend that you join a webcomic translations group so that in future your uploads wont....look like this. I do appreciate you for attempting to pick this up though
Nah it's starting to get werid idrc care if the artist presents their relationship in a different universe they originally had a father/son relationship and to change it into something werid is strange.....not only that if they HAD to show that kind of relationship between the two why keep the kid in his late teens and the wolf still in his early 30-40's??? Even werider in the alter universe art work in universe they have other characters mistake the two for father and son...I can't keep defending some of the art work. If they wanted to take a realistic approach to the kid being fatherless maybe give him abandonment issues or something and stop crossing the line of emotional incest
I said this last time how the author should of just had past hyo-un have feeling for past his past lover then in the future where they meet as adults their romantic relationship wouldn't be as werid. But at this point I really might drop this I don't view them as father and son but i totally get why others do and I can see the slight dynamics there so them fucking in this chapter is totally werid another werid thing is that last chapter they had hyo-un's lover (forgot how to spell his name) openly acknowledge that hyo-un feelings for him was werid. So it's pretty gross how even the characters acknowledge that this shit is werid.
I get that the author probably couldn't find a reason on how to make them fall in love in the past but literally it could of been that hyo-un had a crush on him and started a relationship with his current reincarnation who he met as an adult and didn't raise instead of whatever the fuck this is....I'm just saying that they could of kept their normal friendship in the past so their romantic relationship in the future wouldn't be looked at werid
On one hand I get why Dan would "love" him because he basicly helped him out and stuff. But on the other hand he abused him as well me personally idgaf what you give me it don't matter if your just gonna use it against me
1.On one hand this is somewhat okay because the Dragon isn't really human
2. On the other hand the male lead basicly watched him grow up, raised him and is basically his father figure