Tbh at first I didn't think much of this story but as I read more and more I got really pissed off. Personally I didn't care if the Mc and the male lead had sex or not I just hated that half their relationship was a "will they fuck or won't they?" I also hate how stupid they make the Mc. Don't get me wrong they don't have to write the MC to be a know it all it's interesting to have the MC draw his own conclusions at the situations that are presented to him it's just that he tackles them in the WORST way ever. Not only that he seems to really have no personality besides the fact that he's an S rank guide and doesn't want to have sex. Going back to the male lead I genuinely have no problems with him I like his personality and carisma and how his attitude bounces off the other characters. It's genuinely just the male lead that I have a problem with, I don't like the fact that he's clueless all the time and does the same think for 45 chapters. And his relationship with the male lead also falls apart because let's be honest we both know the male lead doesn't really love the Mc per say but is just fascinated by then and honestly that would've been fine if they wrote the MC better. Idk for me it's just like everything is out in the open but the Mc will still looking inside if that makes sense. The story has interesting characters and world building but that doesn't matter if the character we have to see 90% of the time doesn't adjust and understand any of it.
I know this is already really long but I just wanted to add a little more about the male lead. Just cause he has flaws doesn't mean he's poorly written in my personal opinion he's just very siff in writing if that make sense because the Mc doesn't have enough personality to really bounce of the male lead. They have chemistry (i don't mean romantically I just mean they have multiple settings of interactions) it's just that it seems the author can't do anything with it because they didn't put any type of thinking into the Mc. The Mc is basically just a strongb S rank guide that constantly is sex repulsed and has only don't his job a total of 3 times throughout the story. He doesn't so anything at all and it's sad that in the first few chapters it seemed like the MC was hiding a huge secret and maybe this dumb persona he had was just an act and idk he was gonna he revealed to be something cool. I'm sorry this is so long but I just hate when stories have such a good concept but it falls apart because of something so small.
I agree but I his dumbness is kinda justifiable due to his past. Idk if I can give spoilers but to keep it vague MC couldn't really develop much due to the previous bondage that was forced on him (as shown through the mark on his chest)
That explains his lack of sexual interest but not lack of personality and for me that's the issue.
I've already posted a comment talking about how the author is weird for shipping characters that they wrote with a CLEAR father and son dynamic in an alternative universe but this comment is more gor the fans who keep fighting with people who have similar opinions to mine. You guys keep telling us to drop it but not all of us are reading the story for those alternate universe chapters but still it's so strange that the author write those kind of chapters with the exact same characters. Even though throughout the alternate universe chapters nothing sexual happens there's still a lot of....interesting intimate moments between the two characters that a father and son wouldn't have. So I ask why do YOU people think it's okay for an author to basically write a borderline incestuous side story with extra steps. Last time I had someone respond to my comment saying "The author is getting hate they have to!" Let's be so for real, they're a WHOLE adult and can simply just risk losing that side of their fan base that is into that.
I definitely can say that this is on of my favorite BL stories it's not just top and bottom MC fucking all day and even though it started off like that in the beginning it actually wasn't bad compared to most BL. I love how the story has world building and character building as well (I wanna say Ken is apart of character building but they changed him a lot especially how he appears physical aka they basically made him a twink even though he already was pretty twinkish but in my opinion they made it look more weird.) I don't really agree with some of the comments talking about character flaws even thought it's apart of the story and what make it interesting, I just think if you can't handle character PERSONALITY flaws then maybe this isn't for you cause half the story is about flaws and trauma
SOMEBODY PLEASE TELL ME THE MC STOPS BEING SO STUPID PLEASE I DONT CARE IF ITS A SPOILER
He will run away soon! After making a deal with Lina….
Thank you so much
Atp I wish the mc would die and idk come back with some character development cause like story wise he is honestly better off dead.
Not to be rude but based off the translations it seems like English isn't your first language and if it is I recommend that you work harder on your translations/editing before uploading. I recommend that you join a webcomic translations group so that in future your uploads wont....look like this. I do appreciate you for attempting to pick this up though
Nah it's starting to get werid idrc care if the artist presents their relationship in a different universe they originally had a father/son relationship and to change it into something werid is strange.....not only that if they HAD to show that kind of relationship between the two why keep the kid in his late teens and the wolf still in his early 30-40's??? Even werider in the alter universe art work in universe they have other characters mistake the two for father and son...I can't keep defending some of the art work. If they wanted to take a realistic approach to the kid being fatherless maybe give him abandonment issues or something and stop crossing the line of emotional incest
Yes! That's what I'm trying to say
The author’s not “trying to change it” into the thing you’re fearing
They’re literally just unfolding the story
You’re the ones assuming that they’re telling what’s RIGHT or wrong
The intention of the author is not political ffs
The intention is to just explore a situation artistically
I think the author was originally a bl writer but when she/he write this story her fans keep pressuring her into making bl out of it, so now it just because a mess, she ain't exploring shit she was getting pressured into making these "au" for the sake of toxic ass fans
or as a fucking adult they could've just ignored it and kept on writing the og plot if they REALLY hated drawing these AUs? you're just full of copium atp trying to blame others for the fact that you want to believe that "nooo!!! the artist is not weird so i can come back and keep reading and then complain every 6 chapters!!!"
Dude their making romantic(or what appears to be romantic) au's of their original father and son relationship like characters. I'm not saying I hate the author I love their works and fully support them I'm just saying that their really close to a line they shouldnt cross
THEY ARE GETTING FUCKING HATE, that's why they have to have these stupid au's there is no "or" THEY ARE FUCKING ARTIST, ya think they do what they want? Maybe some artist but most of them draw WHAT THE FANS WANT, ya know why? So you can buy their work, BUT SINCE PEOPLE LOVE INCEST SO MUCH, they have to do these stupid ass AU's, get it no
The thing js that they dont.....as an adult or honestly as person with free will they don't have to do anything someone else tells them to do. Again I don't hate the artist I just believe what their doing is stupid
I just wanna make this so clear I DO NOT HATE THE ARTIST I love and support their works 100! I'm just saying that what their doing is werid. Even if it's what the fans want as an adult they shouldn't even attempt to creep around the borders of emotion incest or any type of romantic au relationship with these characters. I get some artist struggle a lot but personally to me it's better to draw what you want rather than what creepy fans want and even then I bet a good 50% (like us) read their works on websites like this.
I said this last time how the author should of just had past hyo-un have feeling for past his past lover then in the future where they meet as adults their romantic relationship wouldn't be as werid. But at this point I really might drop this I don't view them as father and son but i totally get why others do and I can see the slight dynamics there so them fucking in this chapter is totally werid another werid thing is that last chapter they had hyo-un's lover (forgot how to spell his name) openly acknowledge that hyo-un feelings for him was werid. So it's pretty gross how even the characters acknowledge that this shit is werid.
I get that the author probably couldn't find a reason on how to make them fall in love in the past but literally it could of been that hyo-un had a crush on him and started a relationship with his current reincarnation who he met as an adult and didn't raise instead of whatever the fuck this is....I'm just saying that they could of kept their normal friendship in the past so their romantic relationship in the future wouldn't be looked at werid
Or, he's older but kept the form of a child for years and watched the bottom guys come to the village and Ike idk "stalked" him out of curiosity and feel in love or sum but like anything but this-
Wish Kim Dan drowned or was saved by someone else