beta
Reading this at the beginning, I felt like mc might have some sort of a connection with the original villain(kind of hoping they’re the same person…ish). I was like this is something I haven’t seen yet. And then the sister came and I was like, so how is the author going to go about this(my expectations)? Also, with her coming here and our mc (who is already not getting much of a progression/mystery solving done), I felt like it has too much drama and yeah. Doesn’t really like her. But at least the author has many more choices now.