I don't care that it's self insert at least make it a satisfying self insert!!!!! Like bro!!! The author literally named the mc after herself didn't even used a diff name shits funny
Wish she'll be powerful or even have some sort of good power that makes her omnipotent or smth but she'll still struggle or some shiz
please don't make it become "she's nice and has a heart and she's determined" please please please please don't be a story like that
Y'all actin like Davina wasn't set up as a character that HAVE emotions!! She wasn't made to be a cold and apathetic she was made to have a heart!!!!!!! She was made to have emotions!!!!!! Stop protecting ur y/n fantasies on her!!!!
At the very beginning she was built on the foundation of wanting to protect kids. Kids!!! Meaning she needs to be empathetic and understanding so she can connect with the kids she babysits! And yeah it is kinda dumb that she was shocked that they kill people but at the same time sometimes you gotta see it to believe it!! She's aware! For example ur aware that there are real murders near ur house ur scared for what about to come but you have a neighbor that you know is a criminal but you also don't really remember it that much because life happens then suddenly ur neighbor holds a severed head Infront of you and you know he's a criminal but you didn't remember he was!!! Give Davina a break!!!!
Also Davina isn't head over the heels inlove with the guy she's flustered!!!!! Guys!!!!! Critical thinking please!!!!! Read in between the lines!!!!! Analyze!!!!! Don't take everything at face value and think of the implications!!!!!!!!!! Dear God!!!!!!
See you're one of the literate ones, everybody just wants the copy pasted same old trope like characters with no depth or flaws besides the obvious, they just want watt pad stories as comics and no actual complex situations where you genuinely need comprehension for. The title makes you think its generic but the story isnt. Theyre just mad they can't romantacize the !mafia life because the perspective and narrator isnt some heartless yn
YESSS FINALLY AN FL YHAT SEES HER WORTH AND SEES THAT SHES BEEN TREATED BADLY AND SHE DESERVES BETTER YES YESS YES YESS THIS IS A MOMENT OF VICTORY YESS YESS YESSS YESS
THE ML IS DELUSIONAL AS FUCK!!!!!!!!!! BRO YOU'RE AN ABUSIVE PIECE OF SHIT!!!!!!! SUFFER SUFFER SUFFER SUFFER SUFFER THANKS THE GODS THAT THE FL CAN SEE THAT HER LOVING FAMILY IS ENOUGH YESSS YESS YESS YESSS YESS YESS YESS YESS YESS FINALLY YESS
to be completely serious if the ml is the ex-husband I hope there's character development and he wouldn't just be a one dimensional character and if it's the blonde guy I hope the author gives him more depth FUCKKK even the saintess I wish she will have more character depth and wouldn't be a caricature of the villainess archetype AND I WISH THE EX-HUSBAND GROVELSSSSSSSSS
every chapter with the fl doing something and the ex-husband being a creep I just whisper "girl run as fast as you can girl you do not deserve the trauma girllllll"
I LOVE THIS I HOPE EVERYTHING GOES UPHILL AND THE AUTHOR WOULDN'T DECUDE THAT THE STORY CAN SUCK DICK AND DECUDE TO DO THIS FOR A SICK FETISH
PLEASE IM BEGGING FOR A TROPE SUBVERSION PLSPLSPSLPSLSSLSLSLPSLSSPLSPSLSLS IK BEGGING
It's finished and I'm hyperventilating mash deserves the world and this manga really did well with incorporating gag humor and not taking itself seriously it never tried to make mash an op mc that's so op and cool and powerful and cool I love the fact that they didn't make him this guys who's whole identity centered around fighting and how he himself knows that he doesn't enjoy fighting and that he's only doing it to live peacefully it makes him (even if the writing is shallow and filled with feel good fights) a complex character that isn't as one dimensional as presented
I love everything about it and how even though the ending wasn't what you expected it to be (ex. Mash killing innocent zero and using magic or smth) it stayed true for what it is in the beginning. This manga would've suffered if it tried to be serious and it didn't! And that's nice because it stayed authentic and didn't try to be the new shounen manga everyone would be talking about.
It decided that the story didn't need to be all that and it could be finished in just a few arcs. Mash isn't a male power fantasy who gets all the girls with big boobs mash is a kind and lovable protag that loves his friends and his dad and never changed who he is because he's powerful.
I just love mash so much he's literally my wife.
Toxic yaoi strikes the heart of many
i will devour all of them