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I just don't see the point in this story at all. It starts with a budding relation with Anna and Lily. However after chapter 3 their relationship goes down the drain. There is ZERO character development from chapter 3 onward. At the start Lily is a calm rational person but after chapter 3 Lily is horny sex deprived gremlin. Anna is the cuck mc in this story from chapter 3-8, she's also thrown out of the story. From what I read it seems like the author has never met a real person in a real relationship. The only character that wasn't just a poorly written pile of shit (still was poorly written but not as bad as the others) was the duchess. The duchess is a manipulator who only uses women for their bodies and whispers sweet nothings to them. However that is all she was, like that was it, that was her entire character. The only good thing about this was art. Please don't read this story if you don't want to get pissed off.