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It's so beautiful the progress of the story is good, then meow, electron, the rabbit and bear toys are cute, and then the child with different eye colors is the cutest, THE CHAPTERS IS NOT ENOUGH , although the story is so good there's still some parts that needs to improve which is they haven't been introduced yet who is machoking in real life (I'm not sure if it's machoking or what), what happened to the kid (with different eye color) did his story or quest go well? and etc., there's a lot more that can be added but the story ended well OVERALL I LIKED THE STORY (ᗒᗩᗕ)