The first story and the story bout the guy rescuing the other guy from a molester was good, they became good couples,
BUT WTH WAS UP WITH THAT CREEP AND THE SCHOOL NURSE SO FREAKING WEIRD AND CREEPY BEHAVIOUR
Right? This could’ve been great if not for those 2 stories!!! What’s this obsession with rape ffs???
I love how there isn't a vulnerable one out of them like
They protect the other in their own way and it's so cute ><
Both of them are so smitten and just finds ways to get closer each time
I loved reading this, it took me through a whole rollercoaster ride of emotion from heartwarming to confusion, embarrassment, and satisfaction I really enjoyed it.
Some notes abt the whole thing:
I liked reading this coz I found the mc super relatable, as someone who overthinks, overshares, and is a constant yapper when I get comfy I GET THIS MAN
I kinda have a love hate relationship because its giving "I'm in this post and I dont like it" LOLL but yk what Im glad we got representation over here HE IS SO ME RAHHHH
The writing is so so good, I loved how they portrayed the characters, their experiences and interactions, and lets talk about the ml when we DIDNT know his pov, its like I was experiencing the same confusion as mc like BRO WHAT ARE U THINKING
Just a continuation but I was pulling out my hair coz of how CONNIVING THIS GUY WAS like bro knows how to act innocent and clueless BUT HE KNOWS, HE KNEW
And he keeps provoking mc its actually frustratingly smart like
Well I get it, mc is an open book, and literally the most obvious guy but
Why he gotta look at him like (•‿•)
*Teased him about him being the person that mc wanted to come over
*Acted like he was gonna kiss mc but stop
Its actually funny how he thinks he's all that
"Oh did you think I was gonna kiss you?"
"Oh you just wanna be with me huh, you said you were leaving but your feet didnt move an inch"
Blud it was raining and mc didnt have an umbrella LMFAOO
My last thoughts, this is definitely going in my liked reads list, it was so fun it stirred me up like how they both did to each other, so satisfied with the ending (although kinda wished for more extras and information abt ykyk, their relationship and all that, like what happens next)
Anyways uh i think i already milked all the thoughts I had while reading over this
My live reaction:
This was so good I loved reading it so much
Something about the flashbacks rlly sent me
I love the storytelling
Both characters were so pure and in love and yet immature at the same time. They were just young and they didn't know better
Honestly it struck a chord in my heart reading the whole thing and feeling bad about them but in the end it was all so good and wholesome
The fact that both of them couldnt stop yearning for each other even after years of no contact
The cake revealing chitose's name is the one thing that truly truly got me
UR IMPLYING THAT EACH YEAR, ON CHITOSE'S BIRTHDAY, HE CELEBRATED WITH A CAKE
HE DIDNT BREAK HIS PROMISE, he truly loved him and still does.
Very happy for them, guess they will celebrate like crazy every year (theyre so cute )
Dont judge a book by its cover is so real
(Both mentioned in the story, and the actual cover)
At first glance id think it was a typical smutty omegaverse but its actually GOOD
I'm staying for the story and how this goes, so so invested
Nathaniel is attractive n all but he looks like he's up to no good at all
I hate how this has so many loopholes like
WHERE'S THE THOUGHT PROCESS?? IT DOESNT MAKE SENSE
A normal person's reaction would be to feel resentment but just that, WHAT LED TO U THINKING
"Oh he kidnapped me to LOVE ME AND RAISE ME AS HIS OWN SON?
Fuck I gotta get revenge by fucking him in the ass"
Legit there are plenty other ways to get revenge other than raping him, the author just lacks creativity.
Plus tell me why
AS A KID WHEN I WAS 4, I ALREADY KNEW WHO MY PARENTS WERE i already knew what stranger danger was. So tell me why he just blindly accepted him as his father?!?
Like he a grown child at that point, dont tell me he just believed him "oh youre my dad and im gonna stay with you from now on"
Like u dont even remember the mom and dad that u were with for 4 years? Your childhood home? Your friends maybe??
LIKE how did he manage to convince the child that he was his dad??
LOOPHOLES EVERYWHEREE
I get that its supposed to be psychological and fucked up but AT LEAST make sense and give us the reasoning on why he turned out that way and why he wanted to rape and beat him when
He was literally raised lovingly
The dad did not best him up or sexually assault him, he was just trying to be a dad
How is raping a revenge, i wouldve understood if he did the same but considering he doesnt even have any memories of his parents i wonder what drives him to do all that shi and go out of his way, because u felt the 10 years of your life was a lie? I guess he just wanna be petty now and wants to make him feel the same, but wouldnt that mean you also having to live a lie for another 10 years? But who am i to know what's supposed to be in a psycho's mind anyway
Yessss this is crazy work….
THE CLIFFHANGER??
SOMEONE UPDATE THIS RIGHT NOW