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1. Daniel. Just why? Idk Daniel seems like a cool character, but why make him a love interest? It would be a lot cooler if they had frenimes type of relationship. Also his backstory is nothing new and honestly kinda old. Same old "Oh my entire nation got destroyed by your family and I was planning on killing you but now I have a crush on you uwu". It's so boring and I wish they were just friends.
2. Ditching good love interests. Uhm hello? Miss airheaded FL where is your mind at? All the FL thinks about are abs and what's packing down there, that she literally deserted the only decent people in the plot. Seriously I just know they would've been great suitors for her, but I guess she has the "I can fix him ^¬^" mentality. Like why else would she go after a mentally unstable person?
3. Herrace. The boob window is cool and all but why is the dude built like a 35 year old when his face looks like a 15 year old? What is with his obsession with girls crying? Why is his hair raggedy? He's kind of a dick and we don't actually see much tension between the FL and him. I am still extremely confused on where she earned his affection. Like I think we missed a few chapters sis. He saw her cry once and that really made him think "Ah yes I wanna get into a relationship with you that would probably result in a bad divorce".
4. Brother and sister bonding. Literally wtf. Let me get this straight, your crazy son of a b*tch of a brother is now head over heels for you just because you helped him write a few love letters? Idk that's kinda weird and you're helping him send letters to a sheltered girl, whom has a mentally of a child, so he can wed her? Do you not see something wrong with that? Are we going to ignore the fact that this crazy b*tch fell in love with a girl just because he wanted to protect her childhood? Not only that but he gives me inc*st vibes.
5. Hypocrisy. Girlie you criticize the original FL for acting like a dumb b*tch- I mean child, yet you act the exact same? Also I was expecting FL to act like the original villain and be a bad b*tch, but she acts just like ariel. They seem like a carbon copy of each other. They both are so naive and I honestly just wish the both of them the best of luck of getting that d*ck.
6. Everyone in the manhwa. How did they believe she turned good overnight? Idk I thought that most of them would think that the FL is mentally unstable and put her in a mental asylum because of her sudden personality switch, but I guess they just don't have common sense? Also I don't remember if she said she forgot her memory, but even if you lose your memories I think you will keep a bit of your personality and behaviors from before you "lost your memory". Also how did they all switch up so fast? If anyone with common sense was the FL they would think "If they can switch their personality that quick, they would most likely betray me aswell", but don't listen to me since I'm not an FL.
7. At last the FL. The FL is really getting on my nerves. She had so many chances to be a badass, but never really took action. Even if she did act like a badass a ml will come out of no where and break up the fight. So annoying how the FL seems like she genuinely doesn't care how they feel and just talks to everyone else besides Daniel when it's convenient for her. She doesn't take the time to get to know them more and regards them as nothing more than a fictional character. Finally, this is for most fls except for Penelope, Melissa, and Roxana, but most fls in stories like this don't usually follow through their plan of getting away, instead they then stay at the place that traumatized the original character and accept apologies that weren't their's to accept since they didn't go through the bullshit.
2021-07-26 19:12 marked
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Gonna drop