This is both a kind of shitty manhwa, and also a pretty good one. On one hand, it's short and sweet. The porn is pretty good and it has a sweet and soft atmosphere. On the other hand, the romance is not there. I'm pretty sure the majority of her feelings towards him is just his dick. 95% of their interactions are just sex. They even knew each other in childhood which is a background that should provide ample opportunity for fleshing out their relationship. I mean, he supposedly yearned for her since he was a kid, but we see no heart rending memories or anything. It's shoddily done.
Also, (spoiler will be appearing in my next few words) she should definitely not be getting married to him. That is just insane. He's 20. He should be in the club. And definitely not having kids. Kids should not be having kids fr.
Also, show us his pink dick. And her coochie. I want to see her labia. Not some mystical white slit. Anyway, good comic. But show us a few more memories, deepen their connection outside of sex, and maybe age her down a little so she's not immediately getting this guy knocked up with kids, and it would be better.
It was supposed to upvote BUT YES I AGREE VERY MUCH, THE SCENE WHERE SHE MENTIONED, SHE ONLY THOUGHT OF HIS DCK AT FIRST, THEN LATER ON NOTICED SOME THING FROM HIM. I'M MAD WITH THAT SCENE COS THOSE SEX COULD HAVE BEEN REPLACED WITH THEIR FEELINGS OR AT LEAST SHOW SOME RAW FEELINGS IN THE SEX SCENES, like sex scenes should have been romantic yk
i get the romance not being that deep but i don’t see why 20 year olds shouldn’t get married? not everyone is out and about in clubs and shit. some settle down and 20 year olds aren’t kids their ADULTS. my parents got married and had their first kid at 21 it all just matters on how THEY want to spend their life.
I enjoyed this but I feel like there wasn't enough romance. It felt like a slowburn and then eventually like the main reason they got together was because (SPOILER)----------------(Spoiler)-----> they were both outlanders. I'm sure that wasn't the main reason, so I wish they showed them truly falling for each other.
I'm so mad they turned his character design into Basic MC 101. Grew out his hairstyle into the basic look and got rid of his luxuriously perfect pyromancy robe and replaced it with the standard MC black coat!!! All his flavor is gone@!!!! The pyromancy robe gave him a certain roman warrior-esque look that was to die for!
You're telling me he was an editor for a pretty big shot author straight out of high school? No degree? I would like to live in that kind of world...