beta
First off the debate over her body proportions is long dry. Her body proportions are bad, but I believe that distracts some if us from the fact her character is worse than her proportions. Honestly, this could've ended after 20 chapters. Every chapter feels like filler for a climax but the only climax is during smut scenes. There's no build-up or plot, and no character development. It's clear the author wants to have smut here and there with plot but that only works if you're actually moving the story along. The smut is good if you want to draw smut of weirdly proportion women and hot guys do that but there's only so much smut you can put before it gets boring. The fl and ml are bland and redundant the only saving grace is the ml’s pretty face.