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I remember when this was first released and I thought it was interesting and waited till it was finished to reread. Overall it's a well-rounded story that's pretty fluffy and doesn't go too deep into topics before pulling you out for a refresh. The pacing is a bit slow at times but it just helps the readers understand their relationship and world-building which I think is fine. The only real flaws I have with this is the continuous mention of Bongchons strength and the brother.
It pulls you out of the immersion within the story when you get the 599th panel about how strong Bongchon is like we get it. The point is overused and redundant like it's been one panel we haven't forgotten.
The last problem is the brother I believe his dynamic as a character is extremely interesting and deep into topics not often seen in manwhas and books overall. My problem is not his character in general he is well-written but the way the author got rid of him and sealed his storyline was lackluster and lazy. After all that build-up up he just loses his memory? It's lazy and makes me sad that such a good character who made the plot interesting was written off by memory loss. Perhaps falling off the cliff is where is story should've ended “I can't give up anything.” when Soongap asked why he has to lose everything when the brother doesn't. This would have been a good way to show that it was his way of giving up his life and everything he worked for which was for Soongap who didn't recuperate his incestuous affection to let Soongap go and give up his own life instead, so maybe Soongap could finally be happy even if it was without him.
That still would've been exactly a good story write-off for him but at least it would be a little for fitting, especially for the previously stated information. The ending tied off things well other than with the brother though so that's a plus!