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First off the debate over her body proportions is long dry. Her body proportions are bad, but I believe that distracts some if us from the fact her character is worse than her proportions. Honestly, this could've ended after 20 chapters. Every chapter feels like filler for a climax but the only climax is during smut scenes. There's no build-up or plot, and no character development. It's clear the author wants to have smut here and there with plot but that only works if you're actually moving the story along. The smut is good if you want to draw smut of weirdly proportion women and hot guys do that but there's only so much smut you can put before it gets boring. The fl and ml are bland and redundant the only saving grace is the ml’s pretty face.

Her “friends” are not her friends bro they are fucking opps. Who tells their friend that if they don't have sex their partner will cheat and even worse that btc with overgrown roots and uneven bob w shitty layers is a weirdo who the hell talks abt some guys dick like that???? And Mc just letting them like ho are you nuts??! That's your childhood “friend” they are talking about. The smut is good but there's too much plot to ignore how bad the writing is . This is so ass

Gonna mention and show bagels but not show what they do with them author is sick and twisted how could you

P.X.G v BM is gonna end by the time someone gets their master's and doctorate. Its 40 chapters someone please score

I get its a short story so Im not mad abt how unnecessary the stalker thing was but it wasn't important the fact that the stalker really said “Mb didn't know you got down like that” the next day is CRAZYY

So glad they are getting officials now but sad that I can't see Bingsoo’s messages at the end thank for working on it all this time

“Im going to kill myself if you leave me.”
“Okay! ”

Is how I interpreted the entire scene which was hilarious thsy puny ass knife threatening to kys to a dude who is icked tf out

Bro is so quirky. I'm so incompetent and weird UwU I can't do anything by myself and is super fucking stupid merp! Bro pisses me off and the pacing is kinda weird but it's early so idc as much as I would. Its kinda of funny too but the MC is annoying and the points of conflict are stupid, but I think it's intentional which makes it pretty funny. Not bad but has the potential to get worse. (I've been traumatized by too many authors thinking they can write just because they can draw a hot guy)

I remember when this was first released and I thought it was interesting and waited till it was finished to reread. Overall it's a well-rounded story that's pretty fluffy and doesn't go too deep into topics before pulling you out for a refresh. The pacing is a bit slow at times but it just helps the readers understand their relationship and world-building which I think is fine. The only real flaws I have with this is the continuous mention of Bongchons strength and the brother.

It pulls you out of the immersion within the story when you get the 599th panel about how strong Bongchon is like we get it. The point is overused and redundant like it's been one panel we haven't forgotten.

The last problem is the brother I believe his dynamic as a character is extremely interesting and deep into topics not often seen in manwhas and books overall. My problem is not his character in general he is well-written but the way the author got rid of him and sealed his storyline was lackluster and lazy. After all that build-up up he just loses his memory? It's lazy and makes me sad that such a good character who made the plot interesting was written off by memory loss. Perhaps falling off the cliff is where is story should've ended “I can't give up anything.” when Soongap asked why he has to lose everything when the brother doesn't. This would have been a good way to show that it was his way of giving up his life and everything he worked for which was for Soongap who didn't recuperate his incestuous affection to let Soongap go and give up his own life instead, so maybe Soongap could finally be happy even if it was without him.

That still would've been exactly a good story write-off for him but at least it would be a little for fitting, especially for the previously stated information. The ending tied off things well other than with the brother though so that's a plus!

I would've never thought of having a blatant homophobe as the ML in a BL but I the author did. This in the beginning was quite funny, other than the ML's weird remarks that I would believe would result in character development but no. In the beginning, the ML uses coercion to convince the MC to sleep with him and they have a relationship that results in having a FWB relationship. The MC has barely any backbone and allows the ML to walk all over him and disregard his refusal of sex. Many times this happens especially during the somophilia incident. If someone does not consent beforehand or sometimes after depending on the relationship that is sexual assault at the least and rape at its worst. To be honest this has some potential and I believed it would get better but the author doesn't intend on giving a little development to the MLs character other than “My heart hurts why can't my dick get hard” which is not development. Using the “My dick doesn't get hard without you which means we need to be together excused” is extremely lazy and lacks any kind of forethought, if anything it shows the creator's skills in writing which aren't very good.

I've been reading this since the official chapters came out but the more the story progresses its almost as if the author enjoys writing rape centered chapters. In the beginning, when Seth was raped by Osiris, he was executed pretty well. Seth was greatly impacted by it and it wasn't brushed off that the rape had a “reason” to be here (not saying that tape is the only way the story could've progressed or that rape is a reason for anything, rape is an unexcused action that should never be justified) the story moves along due the rape and it wasn't just there because someone wanted to draw it. Now that the story has continued and it dragging. The plot is slow and there shouldn't have been 30+ filler chapters, throught those we see Seth raped in fantasies that weren't even towards the plot or canon the author just wants to draw…rape. Even more at this point, it has become unsurprising to see Seth raped by EVERY SINGLE MAN he meets. The creator enjoys writing Seth and his towards men “allurement” that even women are jealous to the point it is disgusting. This is no longer about a retelling about Egyptian gods with an actual plot and smut sprinkled throughout, the plot is long gone and the story is just being written for fun and rape makes a more frequent occurrence than the supposed ML.

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This isn't very good. No one is talking about how it's good but rather that art is good and I agree, however, the plot and story suck. It's another rape-based plot turned to romance, in the beginning, it seemed good until the rape scenes for the Prince were romanticized and sexualized as if it's hot when the dude is screaming for help. Even more, the seme literally sucks, bro rapes the Prince repeatedly to the point the story just continues like it never happened. I feel bad for the uke and plots like these are boring and simply disgusting.

Don't tell me this is like a cheaters (not actual cheating) but a regret plot where the seme goes back in time for his mistakes….

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When I tell you in the beginning it was so good like waiting for updates every day and waiting for the next in my hands and knees kind of thing. The potential was exponential. The story was plot-driven with little tidbits of foreshadowing of smut, the sexual tension between the seme and uke was amazing and I couldn't wait for the story to build up. Again the potential was there and then it was gone. The storyline and mood of the story suddenly changed to the point I didn't exactly understand the actions and intentions of the characters. At some points, it would be retconned and then built upon as some kind of “twist”. The build-up to these “twists” was lackluster and lazy at most. Other decisions are made by supposedly smart characters like the Uka for example. He seemed smart, strategic and knew what he wanted. Abruptly that changed and he turned into every other uke in BL’s, it was disappointing.

Overall the current story has turned lackluster and lazy. The random points of rape and non-con aren't even surprising anymore. The smut has become as boring as the rest of the story. The sexual tension between the MCs was thrown away entirely leaving me to feel whiplashed. It's so disappointing to see a plot like this go to waste.

This is literally so good I was tearing up when I clicked the next chapter and it took me to the to-be-continued page. This can be a little cringe at times and make zero sense but at the same time, the maturity of the characters and the building romance is worth it. The only gripe I have with this is that I wish Beom had come out of his shell earlier in the story. His sudden character development was a little rushed and I wish it had started earlier and gradually became more apparent.

These Domsubverses are rarely ever good and this one falls down into the very tall shit pile. The plot is very generic and similar to every other domsubverse the only difference is that the sub has the potential to be a great character. Unfortunately, the Dom is an asshole who attempts to blackmail the sub for his own sexual pleasure, he uses him to tease and have fun with. It's incredibly boring and disgusting. The art is boring and hard to look at. Sucks to see something with potential thrown it away for a sexual assault-based plot