beta
im sooooo over ilay. i dont give 2 shits about his character development if it doesnt happen in the next 2 chapters. hes possessive-great, hes got an amazing face-ok, but everything else is just trash. like, go around punching the guy u 'like' and we're gonna have problems. also some people are going to tell me to look at his progress and how much hes changed... fuck his progress. if this is all it amounts to, he can leave. im reading this for tay, but truly, now it feels like the romance is getting in the way of tays character development. hes such a wholistic character that it physically hurts to see him with that piece of shit.