beta
not to be mean, but this isnt as good as i was expecting... the first few chapters feel so fake, it makes no sense. like 'fine ill sleep with u for no reason?', 'yes ill leave my contact info but we better not meet again?'. 'im leaving in 2 days but ill wait for u to wake up so i can clear up nothing?'. there too much that was added "for the plot" and its just not it. it had a lot of potential tho...