When i first read this I rly rly loved this. But now rereading it im seeing all the problems lmao. Its still a rly good story tho and one of the better conestiual non toxic yaois. Def recommend
1. Ryuhan is a good person- i feel like his character was exagerrated so teh uke wouldn't become the compelte bad guy but hoenstly this dude was a solid friend. He cared for his bestie although he did have other friends, IT was just teh uke getting jealous and possesive thats why the readers felt liek shitting on him. Since he geneiruly did care for the uke (as a friend) and was worried for him. I hapyp the uke realized that Ryuhan wasn't being a btich.
2. OMG I FUCKIN HATE TEH UKE FOR DOING THIS- the uke was treating the seme like how he felt Ryu han was treating him- Ngl seme was way to nice for putting up with this shit. That one drinking scene, dang he exlplained it in the wrost possible way to the seme. But then the seme this werid rape but not thing lmao like tf Aishh
OVerall!! GIVE IT A TRY GUYS ITS GOOD AF
What teh actual fuck did i read. I came here from tiktok seeing the hot ML but this mf ltierally rips apart some ones jaws??? Also like they're adding so many fight scenes and complicated plot shit that I am confused. Like i get it theres plot but i don't understand that it. The cigars??? He gets ambushed?? Gaprow or whatever tf?? Random phsyco dude?! Like bro what-
Also heard spoilers that the ML is toxic af and theres rape so RIPP I had high hopes but this entire manwha screams that one kid who word vomits in Egnlsih to sound profound af but makes no sense at all. The author on something when they wrote this man.
Im sick of the "ordinary but not like the other girls" MC, like istg if i see another plain brown haired brown eyed mc like this smh there like 50 diff ver of him in the BL multi-verse.
Whenever I see smth with espers and guides ik its gonna be BL. A damn Pikachu mommy can get it
SSS-Class trash right here lmao. Its beauty and beasts copy pasted. Ngl it was ok at first but the reverse harem was mid and the girl was so annoying. Imagine a 2012 wattpad fanfic... ya thats it. she's "different" and not like all the other females lol Some weirdass furry omegaverse
Idk he just pissing me off. Bro is indecisive and the story is draggin with Kim's bs like get it together man smh
it has one of those rly dramatic ao3 fic titles but its lowkey just porn with like the thinnest veils of plot