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The story is actually good? I mean I thought it would be your typical story but no. The plotline and development is reasonable and compelling. The seme and the uke is a complimenting couple. In addition to this, the plot is also a bit realistic, and it didn't just focus on their relationship but also to the plot around them (people, connections, etc.).
Ps. That Chief, albeit an asshole, is also an interesting character.