The writing in this is superb. I've never felt so emotionally attached to a couple before. I can't believe this only has 1 chapter. I think that it could have been like...... no chapters and it'd still be good! 10/10, i'd recommend this one to anyone that has mental disorders or are just looking for something to read while they're on the toilet.
This yaoi is the only yaoi i've ever read where I didn't care whether or not I read it or not. I never was excited to read it week after week, sometimes I would miss weeks and then catch up on it. Then, whenever I would read it, I wouldn't be agonized to keep up with it, i'm pretty indifferent when it comes to this one. That being said, it's a decent read, even though it's pretty fucked up.
Thanks Blue for picking this back up appreciate it :D
The translation is much better than the first poster.