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I saw so many people recommending this saying it was so deep and beautiful so I'm like... Was that it? Being a short story with only 6 chapters if you want to talk about things like grieving and do it right at least don't make most of your characters interactions being pure sex without any context. It just feels empty and lazy
I think other people resonated with the very beginning of the story that going into more detail wasn’t necessary. Love that blossomed from jr. high into college years and showing the read even a small sliver of their romance readers can pretty much figure what those interactions were like
We shouldn't have to say this, but: it's so good to see mutual respect in a relationship! The way they're taking things slowly and taking care of each other is so sweet