Hi everyone! (=・ω・=)
So i wrote another yaoi one shot. Can you read and criticize it? Pleaseeeee.
Here is da link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/107227211-chapstick-boy-x-boy-yaoi
it is in english? because i can not understand any langauge except english, wait a minute then i will give you my opinion about it
Yes it is written in english :D okay thank you very muuuuch.
It was pretty good in my opinion, but what do I know ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I ever make one yaoi story but that doesn't include any sex scene cause i make it in english, i am suck at english while it has relate to sex vocabulary, because my country doesnt speak english, english is a foreign language for us, but i love to make a story in english, okay my opinion the story is really adorable, the sex scene is wonderful too. it is a lovey dovey story, i dont hate it, i will be more happy if you make another chapter for them. your story doesnt make me bored at all. keep your good work. i also like to write doujinshi in english but i never publish it in watpad
Omg is dat so? Thank you very muuuuch. ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
Uwaaah! Really? I am sooo happy after reading your feedback. It gave me more motivation in writing BL stuff. :) thank you so sooo muuuuch. ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
Oh and if ever you want someone to read ur works just tell me. I'll gladly read it. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Omg you're da first one to point out dat twist!!! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Uhm... Sorry but i was really never good in writing long stories bc i often procrastinate then da tendency is i forgot da plot of da story (i know sounds it sounds stupid but dats just how it is lol) so in da end I won't be able to finish it. Oh and yeah everything escalated quickly, actually i intend to write it in a more fluffy way but i end up writing it in a more smutty way so ╮(￣▽￣)╭
But if you still want to read more. You can read dis: https://www.wattpad.com/story/104209675-pencil-boy-x-boy-yaoi
Dat one is my first bl story. (Warning!!! If ever you're going to read dis. There is incest and threesome included)--- tell me if you are going to read it, I'd love to hear your opinions about it. (=・ω・=)
Lastly, thank you very much for taking ur time reading it!!!!
thank you for your support but i am not good at making bl story eventough i like writing. one problem is you are too good as a writer. i mean you must make the character suffer so much then the reader will enjoy it the most. someone said to me a good writer is the one who can make the character live in pain.
You're welcome :)
Ooohh. Is dat how it is???
Hahaha well threesome will always be hot af plus it has some twincest so it was like a plus plus lol. ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Okay I'll let u know immediately if ever it got a new chap (tho i cant assure u dat there will be a continuation of it)
Hi so i tried writing BL stuff and here is what I've come up with:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/104209675-pencil-boy-x-boy-yaoi
It is just a one shot so i am hoping dat you'll try and check it out and it would be awesome if you voice out your opinions and thoughts about it. Thank you very much in advance!!!! (=・ω・=)
wait whut??? so the main character is a girl? wait what do you mean by ''better than my beloved'' ? do she have a lover? nonetheless its amazing
Its a boy! And better than my beloved means better than nii chan right?
The story is good.. well done
Yeeep da main character is a girl and by saying "better than my beloved" she is referring to nii-chan. Awww omg thank you so much for reading!!! ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
Da main character is actually a girl lol. Sorry it is kinda confusing bc i did not use any names. Da reason for dat is i just dunno wat name to give to each of em hahaha so i keep it dat way. Oh and thank you very much for reading it!!!!! ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
ohhhh okeh. thanks for explaining. nice work!
No problem. It is actually kinda confusing to read bc da characters hav no names lol but really thanks again! (⌒▽⌒)
its okeh. you can always improve
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I need a yaoi manga that has abusive parents (can either be the parents of the uke or seme). Any recommendations???? Pleaseee. (⌒▽⌒)
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/nanadome_no_gomenne/
I love this one, though it's a one-shot
Dai's family is weird with strict parents : http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/let_dai/
Omg thank you so much guys! ヾ(☆▽☆)
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Soooo... There is this dude he likes teasing me. Like, 'flirt' with me (and other girls) but in a joking way. Yaaas in a JOKING
WAY. It is fucking obvious that he is not serious about me. But then this stupid me got all conscious around him and now i have a feeling that he thinks that i like him (WELL I DON'T). WAAAH HELP. I WANT HIMTO STOP THINKING DAT I LIKE HIM BECAUSE I DON'T. REALLY. (●￣(ｴ)￣●)
Let him have his own misconceptions. You aren't actually obligated to clear anything up and if you fluster some more, it'll definitely prove his point of you liking him. Want him to not get the wrong idea? Leave him be. Eventually, he'll pick it up. If not, he's got a bloated ego ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Okay. Thaaanks (⌒▽⌒) but how to avoid being flustered around him... Sorry i'm really an awkward person. I'm not good in dealing with people especially with the opposite sex (gay peeps are excluded lol) so any advice?
(Sorry if i'm being a nuisance or something)
I'm a guy so this might be bad advice lol but I wouldn't really find it weird if some one were to just tell me that they not like me if they thought I thought I liked them. Plus if he likes u then that would be good info for him and if he don't like u then no awkward friendship :D.
But if u don't like that idea then I guess you could slip something in casually during a conversation where it's relevant along the lines of your not my type xD, but if they have an ego then probably rip friendship.
Ik how u feel I wouldn't be able to do the first one to cos I'm awkward aswell :P
I wish i have the guts to do it hahaha. But thank you for the advice tho. (⌒▽⌒)
Ohh and you're a guy!?!?! OMFG R U A FUDANSHI??!?!? (please say yes)
ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ I've always wanted a fudanshi friend lol.
Hahaha yes I'm fudanshi, use to be asexual but then I found yaoi and now I am confused at lolololol.
Omfg. Be ma friend then! Lol same i am kinda confused about my sexuality too... Dunno if i am bi or wut. Yaoi confuses us (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Hahaha yea happy to be friend :D, lol if any ppl Irl knew I like yaoi severe judgement.
Btw how to add friend on this I ha
ve no clue xD
Yaaay. Lol idk how to do it either.
Any dark manga/manhua similar to Killing Stalking? (anything's fine though it would be great if its yaoi.)
Its not yaoi, but you have to read this one. :D Its some amazing shit!!~ <3
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/bastard_hwang_youngchan/
Is it just my internet connection or this site is becoming slow? （￣へ￣） It's really annoying that whenever i tap for da next page. It loads slower than the usual. Why??? (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
mine is still pretty fast
Mine is slow too!
its quite slow to me too （/TДT)/
This was posted 2 years ago.......
Is it still slow?
Whenever a guy confess to me i get really awkward (⊙…⊙)around him and i unconsciously avoid him at all cost. Sometimes i think i am being sooo rude with him. Though that was unintentional, since i was only feeling nervous and awkward during that time thats why. Also, i am never good in dealing with guys in person. I just get really conscious and awkward around them (that's why i never had any close "straight" ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ guy friends) i think i'm really weird. Tell me i am not the only one whos like this!!! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ i want to change this part of me. Heeeeelp!
I am also like that, I'm always overthinking what I do and say. I can email, write, or do work related things fine. But, when it comes to socializing I always have to be in a group because I feel to awkward talking one-on-one. I feel really bad, there are some guys I think would be really cool friends. But, when it comes to action and making friends whom are boys, I always seem to mess up at a critical point, say something weird, and end up avoiding them for as long as I can.
I'm like that too. I feel so bad for avoiding them in such obvious way ( ￣△￣||)
i have worst. if i hear someone like me tough it's from other people mouth and don't know it's true or false, instincly i make a distant. i don't know why when people like me in romance way, it make me feel wrong. fortunately ( or it seem unfortunately) i never falling in love in my 22 years life.
sometimes i think i'm cruel person to avoid them when they don't make a mistake.
I'm like that too, getting weirdly concious around boys. I'm 22, almost 23, I've never fell in love with anyone, I'm not a really social person and yet, this year I decided to move to England to be a french professor assistant and for a week now I have been living in a flat with a roomate who happens to be a man.
So I don't know about changing this part of yourself, I have no idea how it will evolve with my roomate, if I will end up being comfortable around him or not, but... things happen. You have to give yourself some time and before you know it you will be giving yourself a kick in the ass in order to move on a little.
(I don't know if that make sense... above all that, I have move to England without having a good English at all... I'm not sure I'm going to survive this stressfull year...).
It's different for some people. For me, I'm totally fine. Same with people I've been rejected by (granted, I've only confessed once). It's over, you both know it's not going to happen, so just move on. Easier said than done for some people. In my case it's pretty easy. :P
Same here for me! Though i communicate just fine when i am with my close friends but when it comes to others especially guys i am hopeless. Waaaah! Is there some way to change this part of me?
Waaaah true! I always end up regretting it. Thinking that i shouldve done this and that. Ughhhh i am such an awkward person. ┗( T﹏T )┛
Uwaaah! Thats what ive been doing this whole time! Though deep inside i wanted to change dat part of me huhuhu its kinda frustrating.
Omg good luck with you and your roomate. That must be kinda tough.
Yeah, time is probably the answer. Though i wonder when that time will come hahahah.
Am i the only one who wishes that i have a penis??? HAHAHAHHA OMFG I SAID IT ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ Now i am embarrassed af. I am soooo weird. Sorry. (づ￣ ³￣)づ bc everytime i read a sexy scene it drives me sooo soooo hard ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ like i want to do dat but i keep remembering dat i dnt have a penis. Soooo yeah. ┗( T﹏T )┛Am i the only one??? (=・ω・=)
hahaha i wish for it sometimes too!!! like i can imagine i have one and deeply thrusting to some nice ass hahahaha ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
Strap on, sis. Strap ons are your friends.
No you are not the only one. This is what i desire everyday. I hate it when i feel so hot and hard and there was nothing for me to grab down there lol. Also i'd rather have a penis that's dripping cum all the time than having a p-ssy that drips blood every month for 1 week straight. Sorry i'm so bold ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ I wanna have a penis and do this and that with it~~
i wish i had a penis as well, i HAT PERIOD!!!!! i mean i wish our world would have 2 tipes of women 1: a women with penis 2: with a vigana, than the world would much happier, i mean think of all those rapers, they will think twise before attacking cuz they will be afraid that the tables will turn ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
(๑•ㅂ•)و✧ oh yeah!! I wish sometimes as well!! (●'◡'●)ﾉ
sorry,I read this from my smartphone and have some promblem with touchscreen. I wanted to click like vote to your question but it became unlike vote. (so 1 point unlike vote 's from me T^T)
BTW, I wish I had penis sometimes ,too when
To be fair, there ARE women with penises.
but i mean by birth and that it is natural i am not talking about transgender or intersexual who were born with 2 genitalias or something a like
what i ment a word were if a women is born with a penis its something normal and not like in this word"abnormal"
Dont worry, you can choose to belive in reincarnation, and then there is hope in the next life ;)
I WANT A REAL ONE HAHAHAHAHA ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
So... There is a yaoi couple (duh! HAHA) and the uke, needs to take care of his older sister's baby because the sister left the baby in his doorstep. And the seme, his childhood friend (not quite sure) who lives next door helps him in taking care of the baby. As the story progresses the baby grows up... So the seme and the baby shares the attention of the uke... Uhmm... I forgot the small details because i had read this manga for a long really, really, long time ago and i just want to reread it but i forgot its title. So please help meeee.
Dekichatta danshi
Omggg thank you!!!! (⌒▽⌒)
Hello everyone!!! (=・ω・=) so i wrote another one shot. It would be great if you would check it out. Your honest opinions and criticisms about it are welcome.
Warning: it contains sexual content and uses strong language lolol.
Here's da link: http://my.w.tt/UiNb/EZ16R3VgOF
Thank youuuu!!! (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Hello kisa chan read your one shot and it was a nice read, beautifully written and sexy I am confused about some things should I msg you about it?
It was really skilfully written. The only thing that bothered me was your constant jumping between present and past tense. It did not, however demerit the story in any form.The ending was good but personally I feel like it was missing something.
But over all a smooth and good read.:)
Awww thank you for reading it!!! It means a lot to me when people take time to read my work. And yep sure we can talk about it in private hahaha ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Hahaha thank youuu!!! I will work on my 'verb issues' lolol. Actually, i am having a lil trouble when to use past and present tenses sooo yep. ╮(￣▽￣)╭ really I appreciate dat u read and criticize my work. It is helpful for me in improving my writing skills haha. Hmm would u mind telling me wat u think was missing?? I am curious hahaha.
You're welcome :)
It's actually quite common to lose track of what tense one was using especially when one moves back and forth past (or future) and present events.
Best of luck with your future works!
I was actually worried that I might've come off as rude but glad I didn't xp
As for the ending, it was an inner feeling that I wanted to know a little more on the black dressed person's background, reason or just some little detail catering to their importance as the second main character in the story. It felt like a random dude just coming out of nowhere and declaring their burning love. Maybe an insight of how they met the main chara or what is it that they deeply desire despite being turned down and so.....but maybe I'm thinking too much XD
Too much of a complicated character isn't a good thing either.
(Oh and I'm using "they/their" because I don't want to spoil it for those who plan to read the story)
Lovely read tho! (I could literally picture it lol...but that's just my perverted mind....but srsrly, the details were spot on)
Hahaha i get what u mean. I purposely did dat for da readers to be left with sumtin to think about. But i am curious on what your interpretation on who da is da person wearing da black dress. (Uhm it would be better if we talk about it in private lolol. Bc sum ppl might get spoiled if we continue talkin bout it here) (≧∀≦)
Hahaha i get what u mean. I purposely did dat for da readers to be left with sumtin to think about. But i am curious on what your interpretation on who da is da person wearing da black dress. (Uhm it would be better if we talk about it in private lolol. Bc sum ppl might get spoiled if we continue talkin bout it here) (≧∀≦)