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I understand where Agiros frustration is coming from but I don’t agree with him attacking Ewin like that. That being said, this is sort of my opinion on all stories that start with dubcon. We know that Ewin is scared of Agiro possibly due to their past and when attacked, he actively fights back(biting him etc) and then the two tops coming to help him feels a bit like the hero slaying the demon thing- and rightfully so.
I don’t get, then, why his reaction is so different when it comes to the two tops themselves. Like when he first was raped by them he’s upset yea but the next day he is back to their usual shtick. This happened every time he’s been assaulted by them and nobody came to save him then. The two has since grown and matured as characters and I love them now but I don’t get initially what it was that set them apart from an antagonistic character like say Agiro. Ewins been giving them the benefit of the doubt every single time, from the very beginning even when their actions didn't warrant it- “You want to kill me? Aww but you didn’t. You’re crazy all the time and break this and that aww but this time I know you didn’t.” I don’t get it, it doesn’t sit right with me.
There are some relationships which make sense and feel spontaneous, even dubcon ones that have been written well enough, and then there are some which feel like it’s a thing only because of authornim magic. This feels like one of those to me. It might also be cuz I just love agiros (and zazzies) character design and he’s character writing is more complex with negative emotions and therefore more interesting to me (cuz like let’s be honest we got TOLD that the two tops have suffered but we see no trauma in their actions from it), but I feel kinda bad for him that he’s a villain cuz he gets frisky with the bottom but the two tops can just gang up on him and plug both his holes from the get go. （￣へ￣）