When seme went to find uke, I really wanted uke to be found in distraught. Like crying or depressed in the middle of the alley, looking lifeless, to show seme how hard his circumstances are really impacting him. Not only is he starving himself, overworked and overtired, the man he loves told him he’s always bothering others (which is one of his insecurities), and on TOP OF THAT, his dead beat dad came back to find him, only to ask to borrow MORE money. If it was me, I would’ve just gave up on life.
The uke is always bubbly and smiley,so seme doesn’t think anything of the uke hardship cause he looks like he’s fine. I really want seme to see uke break down, so he knows how insensitive he’s been to him, and start being nicer to him (/TДT)/
Why does taerin look so annoyed when he caught her?? Shouldn’t she be happy? I know part of their revenge plan is to get their exes to regret leaving, which is why she’s getting close to him again, but why would u want your ex to look good??
Actually I think that she's gaining some yk what do u call that? They gain money I think or something I forgot what it is though, and she doesn't still have the same feelings to him, and why she wants him to look good, she doesn't actually there is actually a reason to make the ex girlfriend mad and make him remember all the past things with her (I think) which he will regret leaving her and I know there are some more reason but uhh I forgot
Romeo is a good villain but how did he go from trying to gain control over both families to becoming a king? Are there no knights that protects the royal family? How did he manage to make so many ppl trust him when he just revived not too long ago
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I also wished that it showed more behind the scenes of how Romeo got all those people to side with him and what tactics he used. As of rn, the story is just like he’s manipulative, smart, greedy, cunning, but because it doesn’t show how he achieved it it seems like it’s just happening out of no where
The story started off great but near the middle I started to feel like it could’ve been better. For example, our fl is the prime example of a strong independent woman who made a name for herself and earned her own power. The 2 other female characters introduced were trying to fight for the empress position b/c the men in their family was telling them that was the only way for them to have power or earn recognition. I was hoping that the other 2 females would become friends with the fl and get inspired by the fl to become independent and fight for themselves. Especially in the case with the girl from the duvet house, I wanted the fl to be the one to recommend her to become head of the house and pave her own path, just like how fl did. But instead the concubine was the one who was pushing that
Since the rest of the empire always look down on the fl and her province, i wanted them to play a bigger role in the war and get more recognition, so the ppl in the empire would be more appreciative of them. Like for ex. The situation being more desperate in the southern territory and then show the fl and ml discussing military tactics in the capital with the rest of the nobles, so they could be like wow this girl is a great leader, we have to treat her better. Instead at one pt it felt like the ml was just thr main contributor to everything and the fl is jusy on the side. Idk I think it’s just frustrating that after all her help the nobles are still trying to displace her cuz she’s a barbarian.
Plus it took wayyyy too long for them to kill the priest and the empress. There was literally so many opportunities, for ex telling the father to not kill the empress immediately, which resulted in his death. The ml was saying they can’t kill the priest and empress without proper justification or else he’ll be another guy killing others to get into power. But b/c of that thinking so many other ppl got killed??? Like if the father properly killed the empress, the fl’s province would not have been invaded by monsters since the temple would also be investigated, and then ppl would’ve had to die from the rebellion, and so much more.
100%. Bro the fl was absolutely amazing in the beginning and a prime example of a different realistic approach. But then came the middle and somehow i liked the blond haired and thr brunette haired more they had more perosnality and they had more motivation to do stuff yknow?? They have plot. BUT FOR SOME REzob. She just had to get hurtt and let the ml take care of everything LIKE EVEN THE VILLAIND HAVR MORE PERSONALITH FOR THEM AND AT SOME POONT i was rooting for them. Not their beliefd but the way they used their brain to do stuff
Exactly!!!! B/c all the other characters have such big personalities and motivations, it kind of drowns out the fl. Ofc she is loyal, sacrificial, willing to do anything for her province, and b/c she’s been on the battlefield all her life she doesn’t know alot of stuff which is fine. But she has no other motivation or personality other that, and the later half of the story, the most she was struggling with was whether she has feelings for the ml and denying those feelings
Because above all those things, it falls off of her being Specifically NAIVE, that's maybe why she's somewhat unrelateable to most of the readers claiming she doesn't have much personality at the mid chapter.
True true. I read so much manhwa with similar plot that insomehow have become numb to their clicheness. But the characters here are really good i just hopr that the fl is somehow able to overcome this path cuz this one id actually good(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ