I realize this is supposed to be a comedy, but this is just ridiculous.
The plot is almost literally ' she ripped his clothes off in heat' so basically no plot. There are a few laughs, but they stop after the first 5 times the same thing happens.
Conversation? Forget it! Even if he didn't listen she NEVER says the whole thing or even trys so the misunderstandings keep piling up. Then she literally rapes the guy while he's asleep.
I'm very glad I didn't pay to read this but I will finish this story just to find out if the priest get justice.
This isnt a bad story, but the 4 different groups translating this is brutal.
It's translated into English, but it's FAR from understandable. The name changes and mistakes with both ranks and job titles is nuts, on top of the 2 main men looking damn near identical, sorting out the Royal family is intresting.
If you have time to sort out everything this isn't a bad story, but until someone decides to clean this up a bit read it with a bottle of Advil. You'll need it.
What can I say about this? Well it's definitely english, but whether you can understand it or not is a whole different matter.
The story's not bad but it seems to have quite a few holes that dont add up and the hate in the comments for it is just brutal. First time I've skipped comments I set out to read.
The FL is a freekin idiot! Get your head out of the BL clouds and check out reality! The boy has to practically smack the sense into her, and when she FINALLY gets it she starts dickering about how horrible she's being.
This FL has shown crap communication from the beginning, all he while patting herself on the back for a job well done. Now she drives him right over the edge with her own insecurities. This is, again, something talking could have prevented.
This story is the pot calling the kettle black. So frustrating.