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What I understand with "I love you like a low tide in twilight," was it's like deep? I think he love taeju deeply?

Like.. loving someone at their lowest point?? ¯_( ￣∇￣" )_/¯

I cant give you a proper answer but I'm guessing it's supposed to symbolize that love can come rushing like a high tide. But love can also be distanced and empty, like during a low tide. Idk just my random interpretation. The "in twilight" part doesn't make a lot of sense tho, since tides are always rotating. Thus it wouldn't matter whether it'd be in twilight or bright day light yk

I'm having a hard time with this line too. The only thing i can think of is... They started with him almost drowning in deep chaotic waters, but now they fell in love/confessed when there was a low tide with all its serenity. Their relationship was like moon's pushing and pulling the sea. They were both traumatized by the sea. But now they found peaceful waters and made new beginning at the same place they started, but at low tide

I was a little lost too, the similes before were enough, I’m guessing it’s just an extension of the same meaning, that you wouldn’t be able to tell the tide apart from the sky at night.


(Lol, this is me just waffling and rambling)

Imo, it could also be:
How vast the sea seems in twilight, could compare to their love, or each individual’s love for each other. There is still some light in the sky at this point. So their love could seem, vast like the sea, or the way he sees his life could be equal to how the level of tide, which is low, as he said he didn’t see much meaning to his life until he saw how his lover looked at him, basically he shone in his lovers eyes, comparable to how bright the sky is…twilight, despite how dark it is too, again reflects their relationship, as it was quite messy from the start, so it wouldn’t make sense for the sky to be bright and blue, their love isn’t that pure…but he accepts that their relationship grew from a questionable point, and it somehow shines, which is due to his lover, in his eyes, or him to his lover (I can’t remember their names), the light is reflected on the sea, the same way their love for each other is reflected in their willingness to live or see meaning their lives.

this to be honest doesn’t make sense, anything I wrote tbh,

Or, the serenity of the sea when tides levels are at its lowest, (I thought their love was quite messy), ig at that point deep gown he feels solace? A sense of happiness too? And peace? Despite all that they went through, their relationship still blossomed, gradually, like the graduation of the colours of the sky in twilight, it also gives the sea beautiful colours, it glistens and makes a beautiful picture overall, it could just be that’s how he’s seeing their relationship at that point.


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I realised after I finished typing that they were basically the same points. It just somehow merged into one whislt I was editing.

Ofc I’m not ignoring everything else that was said before, we got to that point.

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Anyway that’s just me rambling, I couldn’t quite understand that sentence, didn’t think much of it until I saw this comment…please don’t harass me. Lol I’m tired, and afraid for my life atp.

Could be a difference in translation too. But then again, I’m not the author, so I have no idea whatsoever what was meant originally m.

Ur not alone (=・ω・=)

I totally agree. The art, plot and characters all fell kinda flat and mediocre— not enough to drop off the bat, but not enough to be at all impressionable. I feel like they were trying to go for an interesting like hate-to-love dynamic but I feel like even that wasn’t developed very well, and I’m not in the least bit invested in any of the characters, not even the main characters.

It's unfortunate cause this had some potential, but there weren't many if any exciting or tense parts. The only hard hitting part was when the esper found him and realised that he couldn't see. But honestly, add in a few wet eyes or something!

i feel like the concept of this story is very interesting but it just feels like it’s lacking some details like when he was locked up in the basement just went by so quick like literally in a few panels. This has so much potential but wasn’t developed properly.

It's really unfortunate

yeah, it feels bland and flat. even them developing emotions for each other is also flat. i think they couldve worldbuild the world more, and also expand guides and espers, eg how did ppl become espers and guides, why are some compatible (like soulmates or whatev). wouldve liked if they made it from hate to love, instead of the esper outright loving him just bc he's compatible with him.