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Waaaait this was so good and the 2 plot twists at the end were so crazy and genuinely unexpected but I don’t hate it. It was foreshadowed way beforehand so it makes sense and I really cannot hate it. I just wish they had more time to flesh out that whole plot with the uncle and the aunt. Like they show ONE singular panel of the uncle and aunt arrested and on trial at the end… but like… where’s the actual plot for that? I’m assuming it was because of what Cedric and the grandpa was talking about, but you’d expect that the author would actually show it happening and show Cedric finding actual evidence to put them in jail…and then also finished up with the whole “grandpa letting the uncle and aunt talk down to cedric” by showing a scene where he apologized and such. Without that kind of scene, I feel sad for the grandpa because it seems like Dillon never forgave him so she probabaly never allowed the grandpa to see the great grandchild. But I can’t really be mad at that because it IS her child anyway. I just thought they would give the grandpa a redemption scene since it seemed like he was meant to be a good character that brought happiness to the family overall.
The author definitely rushed through the other smaller plot lines that they put in,so that they can focus on the romance. The romance was still VERY VERY good and this story was super hilarious so I can overlook the plot line stuff. Excellent story overall