
What a conniving bitch. As a grown up woman, I understand that love doesn't solve all and that sometimes the differences between two people are bound to tear them apart so, I would've respected Kyle's mom if she continued to voice out her objections and never agreed to the marriage. But her doing this behind the scenes while smiling and welcoming the girl at game house is garbage behaviour. I hope that she lives to regret her malicious actions

You know that game where each player gets a word and one of the people has a word unrelated to all the rest and then each person describes their word and the purpose is to point out the odd one out? This story feels like that.....each chapter is like it was written without any cohesion with the rest of the story

Fucking hell this is emotional....I love this story so much. I love that not everything revolves around MC and ML's relationship and that it feels like an actual story with so many moving parts. I would love to learn more about MC's master who betrayed him, about MC's journey since he gained this immortality if he had family along the way that he loves and lost, more about him, the fox guy and ginseng child, and of course more about how he and ML will get closer eventually.
I suppose it was bound to happen when you have 11 volumes but many of these stories are trash. I don't mind the repetitive "I break my engagement with you" plot device but some stories are awful like vol 11 chapter 1 or lack any development like vol 10 chapter 4...oneshots can still be good when done right and this just turned something that could've been generated by a first gen LLM or a 12 year old writing fanfics on wattpad in 2010