Reading this again I have mixed feelings about this story. I mean it's an okay story in my opinion but at the same time Chisato is stupid as fuck sometimes which makes me cringe. Either that or he's REALLY dense for a grown man with a child who's smarter than him.. It's tagged 'Comedy' but I don't really find it funny.
All in all I like it a little but dislike it at the same time.
I personally think that this story doesn't really work as a yaoi. I feel like it should've been more of a shounen ai.
To me the story didn't seem right as a 3P and have intercourse because I didn't think that the story flowed in that direction.
It's somewhat tolerable, but as I stated above, I don't really like it due to those thoughts.
I seriously question as to why Okino blushes at every damn thing and guy he sees. For some reason it bothers me so bad.... Like.. Why?
Elementary dear Watson: he isn't used to the sights of smexy semes, therefore he blushes from the yumminess...i'm like that too when it comes to hotties with blue eyes ;P
Pretty good start but I was slightly confused, but I understood it.
Even if I did understand the concept of making the dolls "real" it still boggles my mind leaving many questions.
I cringed a bit when reading the beginning, skimmed till the middle then just stopped. I'll maybe pick this back up when I feel like it. Wasn't my cup of tea from the start but I'll try it out someday.
So in chapter 8, the bunny is cute and all... But it's obstructing extra areas than just censoring the intimate parts. I'd rather have white dicks, black lines, and even blurred than a huge ass bunny head blocking out a large area than what it's originally suppose to be blocking.
Other than that the raw chapter is dark as usual.