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I freaking loved the art but the ending was--! This author is too cruel! First we have the pre-side story ending being abrupt as fk and then I get my hopes up thinking that maybe the side stories will fix it but NOPE! This thing started so strong, was hella hot and just spat in our faces at the end!
The randomly quick ending and the lackluster 'sidestory ending' (which is already VERY telling tbh) makes me think the author just lost interest and wanted to milk the audience for some more. Which, usually works with smut content, so....
I feel so bad for MC man... I was kinda hoping he did get away and find his daughter eventually. But of course knowing what kinda story this is there was no way he wasn't going to be found... I think he should try to sweet talk his way out of this and maybe use the seme's obsession with him to his advantage. Like make him do stuff that would actually benefit the people or just roll with it until he can find a chance to kill him.