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Sasya’s emotions and feeling are transparent but the way the author did karel’s feels chaotic. Like it doesn’t flow right. Idk if it's because of the different povs but the switches just felt really sudden.
It felt like in the first half he was doing this as an act of revenge but we see that what he’s doing was actually to protect him and then now it doesn’t even look like he’s hiding it anymore. Idk how to explain it better. He’s just making me confused at this point.