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love this story so cute but you can see the author change the plot in the last chapter lol ;p like when exploring japan he doesn't know what electricity is or tap water but then he is on a plane lol. i think the author was going to do another world type love but then when they did the mirror break scene realized how they going to meet if the mirrors broken so they just put them in the same world

it was fine. not very exciting but it was cute ig. the student thats gay his crush looks like the mc which was funny and so does the clinic umbrella guy in the last chapter like everyone in this story has a type and its short, black hair, big eyes, lol.
but yeah could have had a better climax and ending.

starting from chapter 205
1. little 10 year old jung is soooo cute
2. the fish plot line is sooo funny like lolllヾ(☆▽☆)
3. the plot of the story is sooo good like the mystery and new information is just sooo goood i cant find the words to describe how much i love the plot
4. OMMGMGMG spoiler sorry not sorry jund dawon making the dungeon in his fight with the king what OMGGGGG !!!!!!!!! what omg i cant this is peak writing
5. so who is alpha like if the world is coming to an end now shouldnt we see alpha?

1. love the fl cleared up a memory misunderstanding by folding immediately when the ml guessed it correctly lol
2. bro breaking pens left and right everyday son no pen safe hide the ink dude
3. kind of boring ending like lets just end the story
4. the hair thing that the tutor gave is soooo ugly like if its not a bomb im be mad bc who would gift such an ugly hair charm. the real reason she gave it to the duchess straight hideous. and like it looks like a brooch so why make it a hair piece when it could be a brooch. soo pls let it be a bomb
5. the red haired once noble now commoner is sooo hot like poverty did her right, lost weight but still has curves in alll the right placessss. her guard lover is hot tooo likee
6. the ugly hair pin givess her powers that stupid i hate it
7. so much of the dialogue in this story is soo hard to read. like it just does not sound natural at all. chp 64 the blonde empire? i think he is talking to himself and it just reads sooo bad. and the chapter where the black haired ml leaves for the journey he and the fl are talking on the bed and its just like ugghh what are yall saying like omg this conversation is soo childish
8. the witch is the best thing in this story omg look at herrrr the artist put all her talent into this character omg perfection i wish the witch was the main character like girl just wants to have fun why ppl think she the villain shes not seeking ppl out they find her
9. him gettting hurt then healed was so boring like dude was dying but it was done in a way that we knew he was gonna be saved so like it did not really bring out emotions
10. i want a gl with the winter witch the the mom now daughter sienna
11. it was fine. kind of boring but cute

i hate this part of a story, like when you reread when the story is complete, it wont be bad but as a weekly reader its such a dragggg! like how long can we circle each other and reminisce our romance and lung cancer! almost a month (〜￣△￣)〜

1. this story is very long the start was okay the middle kind of boring but the end is getting more interesting
- its boring again i am struggling to reaad "so quit" "NO" im in to deep sadly
2. i thought the dad lost a leg so him having two legs was a suprise
3. not saying we never see him go pick up the umbrella bbuuuuttt
4. the profile noses... dear lord
5. wow never ending

1. THE CAT SOUP WHATTT just say the cat died like why add killed to be eaten omg why
2. Ben dover - stupid joke but yeah funny
3. lowkey a strange thing to get mad at like u lied about going to a club so sad.
4. liked the side couple ig
5. it was good ig there was not much story but it was funny

at first it was enjoyable two sad lonely weird guys falling in love, then the sis got introduced more into the story and the author did of bad job of giving her a role. like there is a thick wall between evil sis or tough but secretly sweet sis and the author was on the wrong side but then tried to switch back but its like already to late, shes evil. and bc the greater evil, dad, was never introduced, she's the villain of the story so her having a happy ending tormenting her bro forever kind of just ruins the whole thing.
Minho family story line definitely could be expanded, like whole lot of stuff going on there.
the ml never got relief from his family he is still sad, so we are stuck with that feeling.
the story lived up to the name i wish it was a dream. and bc of the title for a hot minute i thought it was going to be a plot twist and the ml like has a mc doll that he moves around with his powers and sprays the cologne on and is just crazy pycho lol

1. im crying the special is so sad like what ┗( T﹏T )┛
2. the miscommuntion trope is kind of happening but they have huge faith in eachother and know each other well enough to guess the situation so thats nice, but also worrisome bc im scared
- i think they make it through the miscommunication and now are dealing with trauma and shame
3. if its memory lost ill kill myself
- i live another day
4. yall we need a therapist like dude you have one share, also bring more then just your anxiety problems to her, i feel this story of over looking the therapist
5. best wait was not spoiling who the top was, at first it was a toss up but then it became clearer as they drew closer to d-day was fun to guess lol

1. had to leave after the dick pic bc why would he send that
2. so i saw a saved pic of there being two of the uke (idk his name) so he is a twin, so im guessing that the other bro is the club slut
3. the other perspective does make a reasonable point and the author did a good job of bringing them together to tutor.
4. how the hell did he get the glasses in his mouth
5. damn his twin is aggressive but i dont not like him im guessing they dont have a good relationship but its probably bc the twin left instead of struggling with his family
- was half right
6. so the seme is interesting bc he thinks he is talking to a really experienced person who would like the idea of being fuck buddies and nothing else, so from his perspective he is being kind and the uke is being weird.
- also ppl dont like the mc (seme) bc his had a double standard but he knows he is also a slut and that is how he would reason with himself when he was being judgy or possessive. so honestly the mc is pretty self aware
7. okay so the uke is okay with being fuck buddies he was just confused at first on what was up
8. things are htting the fan
9. poor twins
10. both the seme and uke are matching freak and vibe. they could be the same person with the way they act so similar, both dont really speak to anyone bout any of their problems, are kind of just going with the flow and seeing how things play out.
- the seme is more aggressive then the uke in terms of actions but overall its pretty equal.
- there is no rape, the uke had told the seme no and the seme listened, the seme's a weirdo and a freak but he's not terrible.
- the uke he is a weirdo too, like what straight guy is just like ig gay sex cant be that bad, then just lets the seme do whatever he wants.
- the uke could have cleared up the misunderstanding that he was not a slut but he decides to go with it bc he liked the sex (matching a freak), he even looked up and came prepared lol
- the seme feels bad about being rude to him but like how was he supposed to know uke had a twin, when even the uke didnt really know what his twin was up too. yk like you dont just ask someone if they have an identical twin thats down for a fun time whenever bc 9.999/10 times that would make you seem insane.