icecoffee1111's Topics (136)

1. i hope sianna gets better, bc rn she's kind of irritating, like yes she traumatized but observe ur surrounding, lorena is not here, be smarter and more proactive pls. another thing i hate is when fl like this only will see the bad in the ppl around them now and cant make correct judgements on the situation
2. looked ahead they are still children 80 chapters later crazy, this is going to be so long
3. so the ml is one of the brothers and thats something. bc i thunk its the older one and the age and physical difference is sooo big
4. its actually crazy that the older bro is the ml and not the younger kid. michel is so much more likable and they are way closer and of you take his tsudernu personality then he wasnt ever that mean
5. stopped chp 31

1. the dynamic is cute but the story is kind of boring
2. does anyone find the holding a condom in your mouth hot or sexy bc it just seems silly and impractical
3. ok the plot line with the tennesse platoon was good
4. for 60 chapters it was really short but it was okay nothing to complain about :)

i didnt realize this was incomplete im on the edge of my sit give me moreee i need to know the ending!!!!!!

1. bruh hope they get tested regularly
2. i was ready for the dooshik (which typing out is two letters off for the word dogshit which is funny but also rude) to be a horrible person but so far he is like really sweet
- best guy ever i love him
3. has he every done the math on what he needs to pay bc its seems like the pearls are high value and then him being a such debt (also its just a common trope for the debt collectors to be lying about how much is owed )
4. bruh im sad that this story gets "dark" bc its so happy and cute right now
5. you can kind of tell how lonely they are with how quickly they got attached. hope they get healthier mental states (lol she write knowing thats insane)
6. i like how fast paced this story is
7. bro dooshik and jooha are like too pretty the author took time to craft those faces
8. yaoi authors really like using the "fuck me so hard that I break and forget everything" and it just doesnt make sense and annoyings me a little
9. i hate when characters dont communicate like just take to eachother and all your problems will have much easier solutions !!!!!!!!
10. yall i know a great fictional therapist from Even If You Dont Love Me, i think her work would be much appreciated
11. i hope the mixed eyed brother kills pilwoon, bc he has problems and he should go to jail but i want pilwoon died so win win yk.
- yall im so smart like i called it
12. also pilwoon is such a good villain, like really enjoying how terrible he is
13. i like but also dislike he lost his memory, like its nice that he doesnt have to remeber the bad things but he forget his honey
14. why is the restaurants name Pearl Boy and not just pearl bc pearl boy is such an ugly name
15. Good read, glad his memory is back and they are happy. Dooshik is the best def a fav on miine now and jooha is just a little cutie and together they are perfect 10/10 couple.

why am i crying like whattt

1. it was cute
2. very surprised its more than 20 chapters but the conflicts to make it longer were fine ig, like opposition from uncle who once had cat girlfriend but the reasons kind of weird bc its not bc hes a cat but that he might die, like dude anyone can die and the 2nd conflict was good
3. poor star i need the side story now like cliffhanger give me the story omg
4. ig rai going to be a housewife bc hes not a person so interesting lol

need to know what leah did to capture a prince lol girl had a plan

1. really like the mc but i need him to stop walking head first into danger with zero feaar like buddy your body and sizes are not what they used to be so have some caution
2. the little brother is so annoying like bro you need therapy and jail and his pissing me off
3. i feel bad for the og person hope he got peace since supernatural stuff happens in this world he should be living a new happy life
4. i feel we deserve more romance and more torment of the lil bro
5. lowkey it doesnt feel finished like maybe a timeskip of them living together and hanging out with friends would be nice to give more happy vibes or just a date chapter or something. I think its bc the climax was the practically end of the story, like ok conflict over, look they happy, the end.
- It would have been nice if they made a grave for han siwon (really hoping thats his name) as a way for the mc to say good bye to himself but also to give han peace without being forgotten, like bro youre scared of been erased this poor guy has no one to mourn his tragic passing.
- Also it would have been nice to see more of the parents we see how his parents were so new parent dynamics would have been interesting. And like they set up this warm parent hug and smiles in the hospital and then we never see them again
- Also the lack of settings, the main setting was school which is fine but it was also like the only setting, like idk change the scenery to make the story more alive.
- lastly the resolve to the conflict, joonhon just continues on, the lil bro gets threatened and thats it, i feel like more needed to happen like one solid beating with broken bones to make up for the fact they killed someone while i would still be mad at least we have some peace
6. so yeah its was fine ˘◡˘

i want to see dawool and eden. i liked the main couple but they set up a story with dawool to much to leave us hanging with a "they get together later" !!! i want. to see it give me the story !!!!

1. the nipples bro i would cry too if i forgot lol
2. the bunny mug, like broo the ears stab your eyes out no way its functional
3. the owner friend getting the tea lol
4. im glad he agreed to date or it would have been annoying
5. are the loud couple next door gonna have some sort of role or what bc we see so much of them
6. mc is not ready for a relationship, yes jio is colder than he should be, but mc makes everything he does into him cheating and them needing to break up. jio also needs to step up but be less cold bc like bruh
7. okay, jio explain better, mc ur past partner is not ur current, so stop acting like theyre the same
8. i know it a writers choice but i dont like the flash-back style, for example in chp 64 they are at a company dinner, then they are talking bout going to jio's house to have sex, now its the next day soohan is at work and it flashbacks to what happened over the weekend. And its like whatever but it been repeated like 4 times already mix it up, let us be present lol.
9. lol the loving couple at work but its a secret so everybody is lost and surprised
10. bro if i had to work overtime that often i would quit and die bc omg its like every day
11. the tattoo guy is so hot 10/10 and honestly i find him most attractive
12. if soohan lies im gonna start crying bc why would you lie and if jio gets mad im gonna throw hands bc why r u mad