How to Avoid Debut
Chap 24
chap 23 seems like the end already tbh. I like the art style change in chap 24 but tbh the plot and pacing is so generic and boring. And as much as I'd like to read bl, I don't like bland plot so I'll just stop here.
Start Raising Dragons From Today
Chap 32
MC is boring. Always surrounded by women. Keeps blushing around them, the women as well to MC. Same chinese women body and face. The men always wants to find a way to fight woth MC as always.
Plot is ok but needs more depth.
Art is alright.
Side characters need more background.
As well as MC's background. like??? yeah we get that he's fatherless and motherless? what else?
Oh dragons are bad in this world? why? just that?
This chapter can already be called an ending if you ask me.
The Novel’s Extra (2022)
Chap 94
Ignore all the blushy blushy delusional women and this is very nice. Though there's too much women around and so little screen time for other male characters aside from Suho... -_-
An annoying tomer
Forcing of romance
probability of harem
Author really putting in harem?
Read the spoilers and fuk u author
It's basically just a cat fight now over male attention
The Twin Siblings’ New Life
Chap 15
First thoughts? It says "The twins new life" but it's basically Arien as the MC and Arjen as an important supporting character. I mean like COME ON!!! If you're gonna write it this way then just change the title to, "My twin brother and I blah blah blah..." at least it clearly says that the other twin is the MC.
That Female MC is HELLA DUMB. That side character twin is dumb as well. How old did they say they were mentally? 25?... Why even say that when you'd act even worse than a 10 year old?
I couldn't take it anymore. I'm dropping this.
STILL NO. BIG NONO. BYE BISH
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