I hated the bottom so much at the beginning, he was so fucking dense and naive and a doormat, like play your character properly the dude is being so clear. And also that thing about pride which is a recurring theme in asian media, like dude your dad is trash, you've been raped by debt collectors because of him and your are paying for him when a rich dude appears and offers you a great deal (because you insist on trying acting when I'm sure you would havs had a better time working in something with a better steady income) and you are still thinking about your pride, like come on.
Anyways, the story became much better as time progressed although the top was flavorless to me, he needed more development in his character.
I liked that the dad died, but I would have preferred to see him suffer more or trying to redeem himself only to die anyway but o well it was good in the end.
Overall it was a good story, not life changing, the best thing was the art, that elevates the score so much. It's not even that long so I recommend it.
There were so many poorly executed plots my god. We never knew what happened to the guy at the beginning who fired his dad or the lawsuit. The top I didn't get what punishment the top got from his past life, like, he just got to reincarnate unto a rich family and found his love again while the bottom was killed in his past life, came back struggling and got with the top while struggling a bit more. The cousin who frame the top didn't get retribution or anything. Like everything went so ficking fast... This was overall a bad story and I'm so pissed because I rarely type when I don't like something but I was expecting so much more.
I agree! The story and plot idea is good but feels like a rough draft. It's missing a lot and was very rushed. Same with the art, it's not bad but could use some fine tuning. But what I dislike the most is the fact the uke didn't really like the seme at all and then all of a sudden did a complete 180. I personally don't really enjoy slow burn but give us some sort of development before diving into you're the love of my life lol it cracked me up that the seme was like let me mark you! and the next scene was them just finding out their ages then going right back to "I love you so much" like do y'all even know each other's favorite color? Food?? Movie??? Had great potential but fell short unfortunately. Still enjoyed it though!
I loved how the seme was ok bottoming for the uke, it was so cute and mature of him, I'm a gay guy and a bottom myself and in a lot of mangas they semes make a big deal when ukes want to try topping and in real life is not that a big deal. with my first boyfriend I had this same situation and he was also very understanding... I still prefer bottoming but having the experience with the person you love is totally amazing. ヾ(☆▽☆)
YOU'RE A GAY GUY? oh, I've never seen one before, maybe it's because gays are discriminated in our country a little, it's more like everyone makes a really deal with it. But I do like those kinds of things, yeah.
ok, I kinda like it, but need a little more to make sure. I think the one who knows the MC is the uke, if you notice he tells the seme that he was looking to another guy and previously the MC thought that the seme saw him so... idk
If the uke is this messed up I hope the seme falls in love with the MC or something ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
I can't believe it ended like this. I'm so disappointed.
The art and smut were one if not the best out there and the story looked great and promising but idk where it went wrong. The end was rushed and we didn't see so much that was resolved behind the scenes and unless is developed in the extras... Ufff sad to have to lower my rating. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧