tocra created a topic of Can't Think Straight

Their growth is so good

tocra created a topic of The Hounds of Sisyphus

And the plot thickens, someone brought up the point that there were other children in town and how the doctor is most likely unreliable in his explanation, and I agree,

there is zero way this town could have functioned thus far under pure compliance, humans are predictable, judging by how prominent the blood stain in the square is shows just how many have died there, yes guwon has something wrong with him but after the slap he seems to be genuinely confused as to why his actions were wrong or questionable, after killing so many for the slightest slip up even in the apocalypse those around him would start to think about defying him, if he truly killed their families and companions the air of resentment would outweigh their thirst for survival, so why haven't they made a move? humans are stupid and think that no matter the foe, as long as you are able to gain the upper hand through strength or numbers, an opponent is vulnerable, so why have they just been sitting idle, serving sacrifices to appease Guwon this whole time??

we can only make out what we have seen, but at this point, i don't have a concrete opinion on anything besides the feeling that the "doctor" and other people in town are still holding something back and or concealing an important truth, either concerning their backstories or anything else.

(We need to uncover why guwon is so essential to the well-being or upkeep of the world as well.)

tocra created a topic of The Hounds of Sisyphus

Yall need to take into consideration that the plot has been leaning towards this since the beginning, the harsh enforcement of the rules, the ability to threaten death or harm over being found out breaking such rules and guwons strange lack of most common knowledge, if someone only knows a few ways of the world and it surrounded by people who enforce those ways how are they to know or feel any different, guwon is indifferent to killing the people in the town yet mornful towards his “failure” as a leader, not because hes crazy but because thats all hes known thus far, he was born in the midst of an apocalypse and forced to survive around people desperate to deceive him in order to gain his protection such as the “doctor” there are many layers to this so i urge yall to actually think about what your reading before complaining like an idiot

tocra created a topic of Young and Pretty Husband

This story would only be good if it became longer and the bottoms killed all of the tops

tocra created a topic of Turning

I highly recommend all of y'all read the novel it's one of the best I've ever read and I can't wait to see what happens in the future

tocra created a topic of Jewel Witch | Jealov

Idk why but this is so bisexual gaze if that makes sense

tocra created a topic of The Mating of Elves

The only good straight smut ive found on here tbh

tocra created a topic of Define The Relationship

Yall are acting like he legit forced him, if lyle felt like he was really in danger or actually scared to do it he would have firmly said no, and if he wasnt ok with telling him in the moment he wouldnt have, yall are acting like lyle is some kind of kitten with no life experience, that is a grown man jesus fuck

tocra created a topic of Nelly's Secret Garden

It's just funny how wrong this all is, the anatomy, the lack of facial expressions, the lack of a good story, this author is an all rounder when it comes to being a fuck up, jumping around and cheering that this is something I didn't pay for

I lovehow we are all hung up on how cringe the rock my world part was lmao

tocra created a topic of Nerd Project

I love how at peace they feel in eachothers space I can Tell that the sun spilling in through the padeo doors is warmer when they are together fr

tocra created a topic of The Hounds of Sisyphus

I almost shat my pants in terror for a sec but im all good now, im happy they didnt actually fuck in this chapter to let the tension build a bit more,

tocra created a topic of Be My Boomer

Ok the story was alright but there are more things annoying with this than not, like how… (SPOILERS AHEAD!!!)















Bro was totally fine with him fucking his half brother “for his sake” without even bringing it up afterwards to talk and explain the situation in detail, alongside the fact the the author has no real idea how gay sex works, and when you think they have finally caught on its shown again in detail how out of the loop they are, the sex is bland to the point of just wanting to scroll past it, and when you do stay for the sex scenes you can tell through the screen how unbelievably LOUD the uke is like

tocra created a topic of Groan

Bro it was ok but i was fighting the art the whole time, ML is built like a titan and both face cards are in negative balance, granted some angles of ML were good but i was fighting to stay focused, id also like to note that for a story focused mainly around sex with little to no real substance in the story, the sex wasnt erotic, it was just like… yeah ok they fucking… whats next?

tocra created a topic of Nerd Project

I love when both the bottom and top have big/decent sized junk, I hate when authors make the bottoms so small they might as well be a woman or eunuch, like let's be fr, people with small dicks exist everywhere but why would you enforce the stereotype that bottoms are small

tocra created a topic of A Gloomy Delusion

Love how bro just pulls out a club, somebody's gotta tell harry that the trolls have escaped the dungeon

tocra created a topic of Define The Relationship

Nah thats a crash outable offense, your saying we live together, love eachother and your hiding the fact that you used to be bonded, an ex whatever, a ex potential marriage partner also whatever… but a BOND??? YOUR HISING A BOND FROM YOUR INCREDIBLY INSECURE ALPHA PARTNER jbsdjhwjhudjsbkjdbi3ghjowhuiehijdhgidhg

tocra created a topic of The Hounds of Sisyphus

Ughhh i want moreeee i love this authors/artists work

tocra created a topic of Define The Relationship

I love and hate this story, it's like twirling on the edge of a blade, the sight is beautiful and sharp but a single slip of the wrist or slight change in the wind can knock you off or shatter the blade entirely, the story gives me the feeling of clinging to a lover in a small rocking chair on the edge of a cliff and it's great but scary at the same time

tocra created a topic of The Hounds of Sisyphus

I'm so excited for this, I'm interested in who ml actually is and mcs past, couldn't help but laugh that ml is like FRESH outta the oven