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I lovehow we are all hung up on how cringe the rock my world part was lmao

I love how at peace they feel in eachothers space I can Tell that the sun spilling in through the padeo doors is warmer when they are together fr

I almost shat my pants in terror for a sec but im all good now, im happy they didnt actually fuck in this chapter to let the tension build a bit more,

Ok the story was alright but there are more things annoying with this than not, like how… (SPOILERS AHEAD!!!)















Bro was totally fine with him fucking his half brother “for his sake” without even bringing it up afterwards to talk and explain the situation in detail, alongside the fact the the author has no real idea how gay sex works, and when you think they have finally caught on its shown again in detail how out of the loop they are, the sex is bland to the point of just wanting to scroll past it, and when you do stay for the sex scenes you can tell through the screen how unbelievably LOUD the uke is like

Bro it was ok but i was fighting the art the whole time, ML is built like a titan and both face cards are in negative balance, granted some angles of ML were good but i was fighting to stay focused, id also like to note that for a story focused mainly around sex with little to no real substance in the story, the sex wasnt erotic, it was just like… yeah ok they fucking… whats next?

I love when both the bottom and top have big/decent sized junk, I hate when authors make the bottoms so small they might as well be a woman or eunuch, like let's be fr, people with small dicks exist everywhere but why would you enforce the stereotype that bottoms are small

Love how bro just pulls out a club, somebody's gotta tell harry that the trolls have escaped the dungeon

Nah thats a crash outable offense, your saying we live together, love eachother and your hiding the fact that you used to be bonded, an ex whatever, a ex potential marriage partner also whatever… but a BOND??? YOUR HISING A BOND FROM YOUR INCREDIBLY INSECURE ALPHA PARTNER jbsdjhwjhudjsbkjdbi3ghjowhuiehijdhgidhg

Ughhh i want moreeee i love this authors/artists work

I love and hate this story, it's like twirling on the edge of a blade, the sight is beautiful and sharp but a single slip of the wrist or slight change in the wind can knock you off or shatter the blade entirely, the story gives me the feeling of clinging to a lover in a small rocking chair on the edge of a cliff and it's great but scary at the same time