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Yall are acting like he legit forced him, if lyle felt like he was really in danger or actually scared to do it he would have firmly said no, and if he wasnt ok with telling him in the moment he wouldnt have, yall are acting like lyle is some kind of kitten with no life experience, that is a grown man jesus fuck

It's just funny how wrong this all is, the anatomy, the lack of facial expressions, the lack of a good story, this author is an all rounder when it comes to being a fuck up, jumping around and cheering that this is something I didn't pay for

I lovehow we are all hung up on how cringe the rock my world part was lmao

I love how at peace they feel in eachothers space I can Tell that the sun spilling in through the padeo doors is warmer when they are together fr

I almost shat my pants in terror for a sec but im all good now, im happy they didnt actually fuck in this chapter to let the tension build a bit more,

Ok the story was alright but there are more things annoying with this than not, like how… (SPOILERS AHEAD!!!)















Bro was totally fine with him fucking his half brother “for his sake” without even bringing it up afterwards to talk and explain the situation in detail, alongside the fact the the author has no real idea how gay sex works, and when you think they have finally caught on its shown again in detail how out of the loop they are, the sex is bland to the point of just wanting to scroll past it, and when you do stay for the sex scenes you can tell through the screen how unbelievably LOUD the uke is like

Bro it was ok but i was fighting the art the whole time, ML is built like a titan and both face cards are in negative balance, granted some angles of ML were good but i was fighting to stay focused, id also like to note that for a story focused mainly around sex with little to no real substance in the story, the sex wasnt erotic, it was just like… yeah ok they fucking… whats next?

I love when both the bottom and top have big/decent sized junk, I hate when authors make the bottoms so small they might as well be a woman or eunuch, like let's be fr, people with small dicks exist everywhere but why would you enforce the stereotype that bottoms are small

Love how bro just pulls out a club, somebody's gotta tell harry that the trolls have escaped the dungeon

Nah thats a crash outable offense, your saying we live together, love eachother and your hiding the fact that you used to be bonded, an ex whatever, a ex potential marriage partner also whatever… but a BOND??? YOUR HISING A BOND FROM YOUR INCREDIBLY INSECURE ALPHA PARTNER jbsdjhwjhudjsbkjdbi3ghjowhuiehijdhgidhg