i think this would do extremely well as a longform series instead of just a 6-chapter one. there's a lot to unpack. just the agony of being stuck in limbo without dying or living is pretty interesting. it wasn't rushed, but it could've been richer with more world-building (not to mention the old vampire lady, I want to see more of her! and the blood pact!)
this is a hard sell but mincheol and fmc’s past high school era story would have made for a great cliched shoujo. As much as I can agree on how extreme Mincheol’s innate hubris is, this character would be the bad boy to fmc’s good girl way back when. Author made a fast forward version of a future for a couple that outgrew that phase with only one party maturing. What a way to subvert a trope. I hope Mincheol suffers.