I would like to take back my stamement. I was a little a TAD bit dramatic they’re so silly like their arguments their couple life is so silly it’s fun to read
I am too. I keep reading but refuse to give this a 5 star. I don't know what you were being dramatic about, but I'm not a fan of how manipulative ml is with sex and it gives me a bit of the ick, but I just love them both so much and he's often not like that... So I just remove a star for Naui's butthole, and continue on lol.
I wrote a whole paragraph about their insensitivity towards each other it’s was odd to me, but I forgot they gte over it in a chapter so that was on me. I also agree when I first read this I was like “hold up now” it was just a weird rocky start that comes to light sometimes, but for some reason it’s so addictive to read, like I love the art style.
Don’t come at me but they’re both in the wrong, (I forget their names so forgive me) the seme shouldn’t get so aggressively jealous of simple things, uke’s friend is just the mom of the group it’s not like he flirted if you are uncomfortable you should just explain your feelings instead of starting a silly argument but the uke got unfair with the “you’re a slut” shit sure he’s been around but that isn’t relevant to jealousy? I see people in the comments going “but he is right he’s a slut” sure, I agree he has been around a lot but that isn’t a nice thing to say to invalidate your partners feelings of jealousy like idk this is so dumb to me they’re both in the wrong I can see where they’re coming from but they don’t express their emotions healthily I love this couple but they’re starting to get a little extra and I understand that’s how relationships go you get in dumb arguments make up it’s part of the journey but come on bro .
IM SOBBING THE UTTER AUDACITY TO FLIRT WITH HIS BF IN FRONT OF HIM? Fuck aduaicty that’s pure DISRESPECT!! And the fact they said “we shouldn’t of invited him” and the way (forgive me I forgot their names) the seme looked at him, like I figure they know uke (again I duck up names sorry) is his type like THEY HAVE TOOO!! Like when they first went drinking he was checking him out and side track like “it’s on sight watch ur back” is so cringe I’m sorry but that’s fucking stupid thing to say after grabbing a collar and doing a lot of barking that did nothing
Been WAITINGGG for somebody to whoop that ass!! This is going to be bad for Luke in the long run BUT HOLY SHIT THAT FELT SO GOODDDD TO SEEEE OMGGGGGGG and to making him suck a gun on stage just bc your parents didn’t pay you any attention is just weird like it’s not Andrew’s or Luke’s fault your parents treated you like that that pig is just a weird character overall
3 chapters in and we already got the stereotype “I’m obsessed look only at me” top, hey listen I’m not a fan of the same reused plot, but in gonna eat it up . Also also why why why why WHY why do they always jerk off on their face? And go “I’m sorry” MMM NO UR NOT IM SO LOST THIS STORY IS GOING SO FAST PACED AUUUUGH