Why do the peppers have to be green?
I don't know...#－.－)
There are red and yellow peppers hehe.
NOOOOOOOoooooo, DON'T DO IT, KEI!
Jeeeez, damned nailbiter! Killed my manicure.
Whoa, this is crossing the line ...
... from good to great! Okay, I'm a sucker for moments of realization, like when Yui finally decides, YES! He LOVES Amemori. So nice!
AAAAAAAAAAAAsadtkdfaslkja!!!!!!!!!!!
The suspense ....................
The men, with their shortened foreheads and oversized eyes, look like they have birth defects, specifically microcephaly, which makes them pitiable and needy-looking, rather than striking, and kind of stimulates horror and revulsion, rather than "OMG, this is so hot!" This is with apologies to any Mums out there with babies that have real birth defects, which is very sad and deserves the utmost sympathy, but the point is, it's jarring to see this in a smutty manga.
The mangaka could simply add more hair in the top and back and correct it
Except this isn't labeled yaoi. So why is it posted under the yaoi updates?
Wait. What? Years of messing around. Years of being a ghost in your own house. Years of sniping, berating and rejection and now it's all "Welp, we had our heart-to-heart, let's f*ck!"
Not to mention that the heart-to-heart is all double-talking and nearly impossible to track who is saying what to whom, and they both look so much alike, who can tell which brother is which.
I'm in favour of any excuse for boys to get under the sheets together, but why make the effort to set up a smart plot with plausible conflict, just to knock it down so abruptly? Not to mention what planet are these brothers from? Because on this here earth-planet, most brotherly dialogue I've come across runs along the lines of "Hey Stinkbutt, stop leaving your smelly socks in the middle of the bathroom floor, and wash your feet sometimes. Your room smells like old cheese." "Sure thing, Fartface, when you stop messing around with the WiFi."
I get what you mean. I thought there would be an actual plot.
Uh, maybe it's the way it was translated? Even if that is the case, I STILL understood it. Weird. And the heart to heart is what they thought cleared up the misunderstanding. Do you really like cliches so much? That someone forgives someone before they apologize or never if they do apologize? After all, that's the ONLY thing that would make sense from your explanation. Because it's OBVIOUS they believe they talked it out AND cleared up the misunderstanding. What ELSE can you be talking about if that's the case? OOPS?
RFLOL! Oh, look, if you bothered to unpack those heavyhanded sloppy seconds of "You rejected me first" "No, you did" "No, you did" dialogue, you have no business lecturing anybody about clichés. I'm surprised you read anything that isn't pre-approved by public committee.
What now? Does the story get a speshul sticker?h "Plot stank, dialogue disappointed, and everything was stitched up tighter than a dowager's face-lift, but, even though it's now sporting its pecker as a necktie, at least the story never got rapey" because, of course, the main concern for readers of incest porn are taboo subjects addressed in fiction.
Nobody is against a little honest communication. Nobody opposes apologies. Nobody thinks clearing up misunderstandings is a bad thing. It's the lack of authenticity in chapter 4 that turns so many people off. It's phony.
*salt bay*
Yes, well, random internet troll ... so dgaf. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Yay for honest communication! Yay for learning to be brave!
Oh fer ... what about Tomohiro? What?