Girl you just admitted that the moment you saw a spark between them, you decided to set them up on your own accord last chapter.So technically speaking this is your fault? This story has some weird plot holes
Are we just gonna ignore how she like you know...sexually harassed the poor guy? Because that made my liking for her just drop below the negatives
She has reasons .
im sorry bro but those reasons dont mean shit
I mean compared to all the killing im suprise this was the issue you really wanted to talk about
her other choice would have been torture
You should analyze the situation for you to understand their setup. Even the guy knows why he has to undergo those situations. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Sexual assault is wrong period! but you do know that this is a fictional novel you’re adding real world problems to a novel that has been written for plot purposes.
I understand if it has triggered you tho it’s understandable to be triggered and traumatised by actions from a novel or manga but don’t read it if it’s not your cup of tea. xxx
Its either torture or that (she needs actual proof that she's playing with her 'toy' ) also injuring him is pretty illogical since she needs him at his best so they/he can escape. So yeah, hickies and bite marks (just wanna share, had a mini heart attack when i saw flustered cassis ahh simp)
It would be weird if she opted to Torture right?? People around her knows her attitude. Why heal him then torture him again? Doesn't make sense with her persona. People (especially the father) would be suspicious on her instead. So she choose the thing you called "sexual assault" so that she can prevent anyone from noticing that she's too soft on her "TOY". Since it's her first time asking for one.
If you don't like it don't read it. Simple
HELP...are u even paying attention to the plot? it's not like she did it because she wanted him sexually, it's for his safety? reading comprehension challenge go !!!
I'm just going to say I'm not triggerd by it I don't wanna seem like a victim when I'm not
And I know its not real but what bothers me is that, that this kind of plot device could have been used in a more efficient and impact full way. From what I can tell the author and artist are both very skilled so it was kind of disappointing how it was used in a manner that made it overly sexual, and from my pov in the end it really had no impact (it was just fan service)
I love stories with these kinds of plots and i usually read stories like this on the daily, but because I love a story it doesn't mean I'm not going to notice it's flaws and not point them out. (oof my English out gliched back there I hope it was understandable, have a good night!)
Ohh I see!! My bad! it’s totally fine and yes it’s good to point out flaws and lazy rewriting. But I did see the point for the fan service since she wanted to aggravate her brother to continue with her plans for the story. Nah it’s totally fine I’m sorry for making you out the victim but I totally understand some people can really be triggered by stuff like this and thought you were one but it’s Okai to give out criticism xxx
Also totally agree that they could done something better for the impact. But hey sometimes just want to do something quick to keep the plot going but hopefully it’s not going too fast past this only has 20 chapters so far it’s got potential but we’ll see if it holds up to it
I don't think it as fan service, someone saw the hickeys as what the MC wanted it coz she needs something that will show or stir up the situation. Hmmm I don't like sexual assaults too but it's just that some readers need to view how deep that simple action is.. and I think it suits the VILLAIN story. ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Let's hope for the best for this story!
the point of the story is that he's a captured slave for sexual pleasure and sadistic desires though so.... the FL is supposed to be a villain and pretty sure she's also a murderer too uhmmmm if you cant handle it bc she's gonna do some pretty terrible things you probably shouldn't read this..
Ok imma say this right fucking here (because I barely know how to use this site) because this has happened to me so much when I comment critically on manwhas.
Some people are really fucking annoying and can't get their heads out of their ass, and just insult me when I'm trying to have a civil debate. I don't want that shit to happen. So just know I won't be taking that bullshit anymore.
Okay but what did you want to say?
yeah I'm curious now too...
Hahaha same as well. Kinda curious what it's about now.
A lot of people are very quick to judge. However, I feel like this discussion should be on the main page and not a specific story :)
Let’s hear it then
For as many trolls here, there are a number of people who will debate civily or just exchange ideas with the intent of understanding the others pov.
Not to sound at all as if I am blaming you but communicating a point of consideration and encouraging self reflection- sometimes it depends on ones initial delivery. Lol, if I sound like an a55, that is who I find responds.
If you feel that is not the case, then I'm truly sorry ppl be acting a mess I wouldn't not post because of that. Just ignore the trolls. To broaden my own mind, I try to consider the trolls pov and engage respectfully to understand why they are saying what they say. If someone has cognitive dissonance going on, logic won't help. Reflecting what they say back ("so your saying you thought I meant this...") can sometimes get a different response.
The artists is using assets that look far to realistic for their artstyle, and doesnt even try to make them fit in. Look at that tea set or the mask in the previous chapters.
And no matter how beautiful the characters say an outfit is it is always dissapointing to see the final product. I know that last time i said i was going to drop it if it kept going on like this, but i have decided to stop looking at the story (which is boring anyway ) and just give constructive criticism on the art.
I somewhat agree. The art could definitely use some work (aka, the colour choices.) it’s alright if the art style isn’t good because the plot can make the viewers more interested. Though, I think it would’ve been nice to have dresses that match with her jewellery, complimenting her skin tone and hair colour.
Oops I accidentally disliked. Sometimes I really hate my hand eye coordination :(
Maybe the art lacks highlights? I see the first base colour, 2nd base and a shader. But the highlights could make it more appealing/pleasing to the eye. The MCs hair is pretty simple and straight, I think adding more volume to her hair, highlights, or even making her have different hair styles would be better? I noticed that their arms are pretty straight and slightly curvy, it almost looks wrong in a way? If the drawer took more time leavening anatomy, her body won’t look so ‘wonky’ or ‘weird’. I admit, I loved it when her expressions turn more sinister, but it wouldn’t hurt to add even MORE. Making the MC have a disgustingly evil face will really make her seem powerful. The usual expressions are somewhat stiff?
Oh yes I deff agree with you on the color choices part. Because the artist isn't trying to go for that vibrant look, they should at least try to Accentuate that muted atmosphere with deep colors. Or they could even do it as the story progress as a way to stablish a serious atmosphere. (Anyway I just woke up and my mind is going rampant sorry for the long reply)
True! And if the artist could stop the same face syndrome thats going on the art would be a lat better. I see so much potential in this artist to be completely honest, and if they are willing to listen to their viewers imagine the improvement we could see in the future.
Im not really a fan of pregnant sex or Is it just me