I realized there is some improvement in the art especifically the eyes. The art and story are still pretty bad and mediocre but the little improvements along the way give me hope.
When you realize yohan truly doesn't want any of this and that the only reason he is like this is because his desire has taken over him because being a vampire makes your desires stronger, and that hayans parents couldn't help him because they truly have never gone through that* a pop of chocky will make the pain go away ╥﹏╥
So something else has been bothering me again
(Yes hello the art critic is here again I have come to bless you with my presence)
Let's talk about the backgrounds for a real min. Has anybody noticed how the characters sometimes look a little too 2D compared to the backgrounds sometimes. Once I noticed it it really started to bother me lmao.
Authors often use templates, so they don't have to bother making background by themselves, also many authors use the same sample of tea pot, what is a little annoying for me
Yeah that infamous tea pot haunts my dreams lmao
XD
Girl you just admitted that the moment you saw a spark between them, you decided to set them up on your own accord last chapter.So technically speaking this is your fault? This story has some weird plot holes
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is so cute!