Why is this being dragged out so long. This could have been resolved like 10 chapters ago. Nothing dramatic has even happened and its going to be another 10 before anything does happen. Particularly now with this elevator hyung who will inevitably tell him not to say anything for the group sake or some shit. -.-'
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The premise COULD have been interesting and fun. BUT. Huge fucking but...
Our seme, disregards everything the uke says and muscles in, there are zero boundaries and no this is not rape he does consent but the uke was also kind of cornered.
There is literally no character development, NONE. Zilch. These characters are flatter than my ass. I don't understand the motivation either of them has. There was zero chemistry.
I got so bored in the middle and remembered I have legit dropped reading this 3 times in the past due to this.
Nothing happens. He pays for sex, they have sex, they go to uni. Rinse and repeat.
THE BOSS IS ACTUAL SCUM GIVING OUT PERSONAL DETAILS AND SIGNING CONTRACTS WITHOUT THOSE INVOLVED PRESENT. Talk about bad touch.
ALSO they dropped this huge bomb of how fated pairs get each others names on them, like why was this plot device not in the first 3 chapters of the story? (it was mentioned in passing I believe?) Did they suddenly decide this would be cool and explain why they absolutely HAVE to be together. Even though the seme and the omega have more chemistry?
It was too short and rushed. Would have been better if they'd just focused on the paying for sex and made it insanely smutty. The sex scenes are nothing to shout about either though.
There are much better mangas/webtoons that have a similar premise which do a MUCH better job. Even though they aren't omegaverse.
The arts ok and I like that fated pairs weren't just OxA.
Think I could legit right a dissertation on how bad this one is.
Anyway, go read something worthy of your time, I beg you.
Liked the idea but jesus christ the pacing is awful. I didn't bother finishing it as it bored me to death in the middle. The first 10/20 chapters were alright and then its just a slog to get to the next interesting part. Which I didn't find even tho I got to page 45... If you've got nothing better to read though and you need something mindless, have at it.
Read this! This, THIS is what a good fucking manga is. THIS IS SOME 10/10 WRITING.
It's not leading you by the hand telling you exactly what to look at and what everything is. You don't understand everything because THE CHARACTERS don't understand everything. It's open to interpretation. It's the natural progression of a relationship and the anxiety felt throughout fucking hurts man. JESUS CHRISTMAS. Why is the current gen of BL so fucking flat.
SOOO TRUE BESTIE THEY DON'T MAKE COMPLEX MANGAS LIKE THIS ANYMORE !!!
Such a shame, it just feels as though authors are trying to make sure they've explained every aspect of their characters/plot when really it's not necessary.
LOUDER FOR THE PEOPLE IN THE BACK i want more good stories like this.
ISTGGGG IM TIRED OF THE SMUT MANHWAS
I'm not against a little smutty smut. I am against authors selling a chapter of just baseless sx that doesnt progress the plot. I feel bad for people paying for that shit. Or they should have a No Plot warning
yeah that’s what I mean you can have smut but at some point it’s just gonna be pwp and unnecessary