Omi want to read (All 82)
beta
Honestly not bad. However THEY MOVED SO FAST WTF. Like chapter 3 or 4 they were in love, and it felt like barely any time had passed
Are you not used to 7chapters bl? where the relationship will be established in the first chapters, in about chapter 1/2 they will start developing feelings, then there will be conflict in 4/5 and it will get resolved in like 6 and we'll have the happy ending in 7.
A FML who doesn't just think "Oh this dude is hot". She realized it was kinda weird and actually said she had a boyfriend. Barely any fml do that （/TДT)/