what if i just ran into oncoming traffic
your comment, your name, your profile .
what does this mean
i am so sorry i cannot be the only one who hates lily like she’s so pretty but oh my god i do not like her she’s so annoying
we only got 4 chapters
fr she better redeem herself after this
redeem herself after believing someone LEFT HER RIGHT AFTER HER CONFESSION????? ANNA LEFT HER, WHERE’S THE UNDERSTANDING??? That’s actually fucking insane for you to say-
calm down i just meant that lily better not be annoying asf every chapter and that the author should at least write reasonable characters lol
I am calm!! but also, babes, this author is just shit at story telling. Lily might just end up being annoying like the MC in Bad Thinking Diary and if so, It just is what it is at that point I was simply pointing out that you saying Lily needs to redeem herself when she, truthfully, didn’t do anything wrong is what was insane to me
oh sorry lmao
Are you able to read at the level of a normal high school student? If you can read this story, and not understand that Lily and Anna loved one and other I kind of feel sorry for you. They were in some sort of emotional relationship. Get into some after school programs. Lily was ready to cheat the moment she saw Rose. She is a super shallow character. This is porn. Do not overthink it.
You are right Lily is trash. I have no idea how she is suppose to carry the story. But that is not really important. This story is for the horny people who likes to watch the pretty pictures
WHO IS OVERTHINKING???? Who are YOU to criticize my reading comprehension?!
Did Lily and Anna have an emotionally attached relationship? Duh. But the scene where Lily literally asked Anna “If (she) ever truly desired (her)” disproves this fucking idea of Lily cheating. Literally that fucking whole scene was Lily pouring her absolutely heart out to Anna—and, now, tell me…What did Anna say after that?! ”I CANT” AND WALKED AWAY. THAT’S FLAT OUT REJECTION?? Ofc us readers see that Anna is just scared of going further into the relationship because she’s a fucking maid (or an additional reasoning, because there’s only 4. Fucking. Chapters) BUT LILY DOESN’T GET THAT PRIVILEGE TO SEE THAT??? THEY BOTH DON’T, it’s a whole miscommunication.
You tell me to “not overthink it” and that this is simply porn, even though I have not at all said anything about taking this series seriously. YOU should not sit on your fucking high horse, criticize MY intellectual, and tell me to “check into an after school program” when you clearly can’t comprehend anything I’ve said. I simply was pointing out what a commenter was saying is fucking dumb because Lily was never in an actual relationship so there isn’t anything to redeem. What does that have to do with me “overthinking” anything.
If you are the only one seeing the story like this, there might be a reason for that. Get help for your mental problems dude. And its just porn. Lily is not a deep character. She was ready for sex the moment Rose entered the picture. She is not a serious character. Weird to spend this much time defending what is basically a hentai slut.
???? Dude, literally what the hell are you attacking me for. You actually might have a reading comprehension problem.
Me, pointing out what the character’s have said and stating them to you is not me diving deep into the story and giving you a deep dive. Be fucking for real. I know this is porn and that the plot is piss poor, I’ve literally said the story telling is probably going to be not that deep because this author has SHITTY stories??
You might just be a troll, cause seriously what the fuck are you even on.
Let's be real... We all saw her blushing face... She seems a lil sexually frustrated bc the maid ain't giving her some action apparently (I really thought they were fcking bc they took baths together lmao). And also she kinda wanna smash the Duchess u can tell ┗( T﹏T )┛
what does the text say?
"qiu tong is sleeping on the grass in a weird position."
"sun jing framed me >:,("
that’s so cute i’m gonna cry
tbh kinda cringe
nah seriously….
yes im a hater, yes i was waiting for someone to comment this.
real
the cringe is intentional. i also kinda cringe at myself when i make a chapter.
but personally, that's what makes it funny. what's the point of worrying about the cringe when you only live once? my entire life is cringe, and so-- my humor is as equally cringe
anyways, go on, keep reading and embrace the cringe. that's how we do it in delusionaltown. please keep hating too, i personally find reading them fun.
it’s just unfunny, hope this helps<3
>>>its blatantly homophobic (and ableist)
help-- they're literally gay? i'm in no way hating on gays, i just imply kdj's gay.
anyways, if you're talking about the first chapter, i'm not even the one who came up with the lines. and I don't see where i'm being ableist?
i'm thinking you probably just read first chapter. if not, alright. not forcing you to read it, just encouraging for you to do so. i do my best to make funny lines without being harmful in anyway.
if the 'ableist' thing is about the line, 'go away brain monsters, i took my meds today!' i'm playing on this joke of taking meds, a very popular joke. i like to think whoever yelled this line is just a poor guy on the end of his wits, hallucinating due to extreme study/work stress and on medications. i kinda feel bad for him though.
if it's about the schizo thing, i'm sorry about it. i didn't mean for it to be that way, I'm trying to get across kdj's weird thinking that took inspiration from nicole's from class of 09. it's more of a dismissive thing of him thinking he finally gone completely insane after reading the same novel for 10+ years. which is, kinda a normal way of thinking for a person who thinks in satire.
if any jokes that comes across as a bad thing, please point it out. if it's bad enough, I'll change it. if not, I can explain to you why they're not that.
i’ve only read through the first two chapters so:
- first of all, you making joongdok gay doesn’t automatically absolve you of being homophobic and homophobia can extend beyond “hatred”. eg prejudice
>> a lot of the jokes being made degrade and sexualise gay men
>> homophobic terms and phrases
- making derogatory jokes about mental illness is ableist, no matter the intention. it “being popular” or “inspo” isn’t an excuse lmao
alr, i'll improve the storytelling on these parts. thanks for the feedback.
NO BECAUSE IF I SEE CHARLOTTE AGAIN IM GOING TO EAT MY SHIRT. LIKE SHES A FUCKING BITCHY WHORESHIT WHO THINKS SHES ALL THAT BECAUSE OF A STUPID PROPHECY-
RIGHT AND SHES NOT EVEN THE OFFICIAL ONE CAUSE ANISA IS THE NEW SAINTESS
why do u guys want vercion and albis to fuck so badly pls calm down like it’s fine to ship and whatever but like u don’t need to attack sunwon in the process they can all have their silly little sex threesome i am rooting for polyamory
Vercion needs to get fucked. Idc if its during a threesome or not but he just needs to get fucked. Someone needs to put him in his place
The only fucked Vercion needs to get is a sword fucking cutting his head off.
Nothing wrong with a little hate sex
People are taking it pretty far hating on Sunwon tho lol. At this point, I'm definitely leaning towards the poly ship