One year in an man has no character development
hate that this is true
ig its fine for characters to be slow burns with the development, but for them to still be unlikeable is CRAZY.
Okay can someone tell me where to find rest of it???
Gotta pay on it. Lenzhin
zinchanmanga.com
Ah this had so much potential, another poly relationship waisted very sed
Okay but... like... uke was super cute and i love him all my heart , and he is so sweet and he deserves world, but...... and big bat.... seme on the other hand i thought would be more caring towards him after that incident, yes he loves him and so on but maaan come on all this and he still is like we are nor couple? Bro wtf , it seems like he was only sorry for his shity as behaviour once uks wasn't around , but once he's with uke nothing changes he still treats uke same at final chap as he did at the begining.....and aside from seme there are soooo much plot holes , and don't come at me with it's only 20 chap , there are tons and tons of manga with only 5 chap and no plot holes , if you feel like you can't fit story in short then don't make unnecessary world building, even the vilian arc was for nothing
Like what did we get from that? That seme realized he loves uke ? Bro no he was still being his old self after the incident , we got nothing from it....
But i do like the story as the idea and i love uke fully i think autor could choose better way to express him , for example we see that uke has crisis with his identity , we could explore that it would be more emotionaly interesting when whole vilian arc . Alsoooo art wasssss sooooo friking good
Back to seme he was giving such a mixed signal alll the time , he was like no you can't suck me off amd then he was like - let me put it in, bro like make up your mind. I feel like it's autors foult and not semes .
And one more about vilian , again plot hole , at first we see that he wasn't to gat a wish and he dose literally everything for it . But then it's like he only wants uke for him because he "loves" him in his own twisted way, but like if it was the case from the beginning why would he "sale" out uke for others , why would he allow other to tuch "his butterfly" . Like two totally different motives wich makes up totally different chrecters and once they are switched , it makes plothole. I think he could've been great vilian but meh .....
Love the uks tho
cuz thats more like him and its actually more realistic that way. What do u expect? a sudden change of behaviour like a whole different person then it wouldn't make sense.
I literally said what i wanted and acknowledging the relationship status and not playing dumb isn't sudden change Also from the start till the end he had all the time to change, it's called development and growth , i guess you never heard of that , or that incidents like that not slightly but drastically if not fully changes people that's what realistic but i guess we are not here for common sense . And if you want realistic in that manga nothing was realistic so at least they could made it like i wanted . And as a story it needs start point and then development of the story and characters and culmination . If we don't get it that means story was flat as fuck and didn't accomplished even basics . So thanks for your concern about my comment hope you'll learn little bit more love you kiss you fuck you
Okay should i be worried like 15-30 ???? Im just starting to read it
threw me off too but u should still read it it’s pretty good and they don’t get involved until the mc is way older lmfaoo like 9 years past
Omg this is so stupid bahaha , i couldn't stop laughing , it's like autor remembered stuff on the way and write it as they go , it started out as silly one but got worse on the way . It really feelt like i read 14 years old girl writing watpad and trying to be deep and dark but doesn't knows how bahahaha i really waisted my time so stupid
I loved frist one because, top also got what he deserved and out uke wasn't right away in his arms after what he did , even tho tops explanation is understandable it doesn't makes it right , he got scared so he hurt someone he loves? I don't understand how can you do that to your loved one , meke them question their reality and leave them alone, and then years later act like you did nothing wrong ! So ya i loved that uke didn't agree to him right away , i love them and i hope they will work though it
So ,, i think even tho they ended up together , it feels to awkward like I can't imagen they being im a relationship at least for now , even tho they like eachother it's fact that they don't know how to be comfortable . Also i cryed for Mc idk i just love him so much ,yes he was selfish as fuk and manipulative, but he was kid and he grow out of it , how black haired treated him after becoming roommates was totally deserved, but once he confessed and it wasn't taken seriously it made me cry , i think at that time black haired one was total asshole and mc didn't deserved that kind of cold-hearted act , there are some plotholes and so on , but yaaA i love MC
Okay it was fun ans all at first but this is getting hella weird wtf, just take context out of it and panels are straight up sonf kid x adult soft porn like bro i was here from beginning and i prayed for this to nof happen but oh well
the author is trying to literally make yuu look like a p3do when he just means well as an older brother help i think this is still cute but the fan service for p3dos is...
Yess i love the idea of it , but how author goes about it is so bad , they could literally have - little boy has crush and ways he's handling it and how older guy doesn't want to break his heart and all that dynamic without making it into fan services for p3dos as you said