
I don’t hate the story and the Ukes are cute... but their abs

It depends on the Author. I personally don’t have a problem with it. But when it comes to bara mangas typically a lot of the uke would be big and buff with well tone abs and “big breasts” a lot of people don’t like that but me typically I don’t mind it I basically just read for the plot and sometimes the smut scenes I don’t care much for the looks. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ honestly I’ve been more into trying to find a good manga where the mc is a fat/chubby girl. I just like the plot of mangas with a chubby girl cause it’s a pretty typical mean girl type manga even though most of the time the “mean girl” is really a male.

I dunno if you read it but it’s http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/deri_pocha_yajuu_no_h_na_gohan/

No offense but i reall hate the "witch" like as q author shouldnt you know how piful you make a character, cause you made them? Yet she only learns more about him and sees how unfair he's being treated after coming into the world. Like oh my god!! Ffs YOU MADE HIM LIKE THAT?!?! shouldnt you feel a little bit a guilt?? Like with Kyte backstory and all, you should, as the author, know why hes trying to prove himself and shit ughhh it just annoys me that shes so ignorant about her own creation!!! ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ poor kyte I'll love you <333

You see when you write stories you don't expect them to be actual realities. I'm sure that if she knew that he would acutally exist then she would have given him and everyone else a good life.
Plus when you write you use a lot of images and symbolism yet for some reason this world took it literally.
I get that this is your opinion but what's your point? Sure she created that universe and everyone within it but it's not like she is gonna remember every little detail. When she was writing the story, she was focusing on the narative rather than on every little detail she wrote. Plus writing isn't even her main job, she is an office worker, remember. So it's not like she will remember everything she wrote.

reeks of bias l m a o
gonna bitch about the FL because she's hurting your husbando eh?
there's no way in hell she'd have known this shit would happen. when she wrote the world's lore and built it from the ground up, the possibility of it existing would have never crossed her mind. plus, the genre she's writing requires sob stories like the prince. makes sense for her to disassociate in the beginning. this mind bending reality would obviously take a while to accept. you'd think "oh fuck, the ocs i made actually lived all the shit i penned. wait, are they even human? how could they even feel when all their lives up until now were from the stroke of my pen? are their thoughts even theirs?" i'm honestly surprised she didn't proclaim herself as their god. she's a good egg.

Uhhhh... no fucking shit??? What? I cant express my opinion on a manga im reading because it doesnt aline with yours??? Look sweetie, a good author entices and creates strong emotions within the reader and as a reader im entitled to my opinion as are you. Is my comment hurting anyone? No.
Look honey, in the real world you just have to accept the fact that they're people who wont have the same beliefs or values as you because morals are a soceity based concept.
So is it wrong of me to be strong empathy to the ML?
Is it wrong of me to not conder ignorance as an excuse?
You can't possibly believe a "i didnt know" is a good excuse to ruin someones life.
However i do know this the that as a author, you know your works aren't going to come to life. So while its nice youre so empathetic towards the FL, im not... and do you know why?
CAUSE ITS MY OPINION!!!!
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Thank you. (≧∀≦)
While readng this manga, my frustration with FL just kept pilling up. While I know its not her fault and her reactions are normal, I cant help but emphasis with the ML. He, as a orphan, tried so hard to gain his father approval and loved his brothers lost everything because of the previous stories shes written. It just made me really mad knowing that the FL gave him that type of backstory and basically still pinned the world against him. Like at least make him evil??? Whyd you give him king-worthy attributes, a sad backstory, and the throne to only take the thing hes been working so hard away from him?? Like... everyone hates him and she wrote the story like that, yet shes shocked when she sees that everyone hates him... like what??? Her naivety, although is supposed to be one of her charms, annoys me. I also see where you guys are comming from, but at the same the same time i dont agree, hoever i respect everyone opinions, i dont respect rude people. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

Don't take this the wrong way but I'm not siding with you. I pretty much 95% disagree with you. I also don't think that you should have replied to rudeness with rudeness either because it just creates more rudeness. Although I do get why anyone might react emotionally when in the moment.
I think that the FL did paint the guy as a villain. She wasn't trying to make him a nice person who faces endless struggles for no reason.
The novel relies on the idea that the characters existed before and after/ outside the novels. Thus it's makes sense to say that there are many things outside her control/things that existed without her interference. She probably didn't mean to give him king worthy attributes. From what I can see it was more of a "top dog who is a horrible evil person and ends up failing, giving the good guys a chance to come out on top."
In terms of the "just noticing how everyone hates him" thing, I do think it's just more of a realization/shock of seeing things play out IRL. You know when you write things on paper, you don't really see the reality but when you see it through your own eyes, the reality of it really hits you especially when you realize that because of you that person faces those struggles. It's basically just sad especially since she didn't think/know that he exists and this would affect him in any way what so ever.
I'm not a writer but I do have a blog where I write about characters. I have made about 20 chapters so far. (About 3/4 for each character) and I still have to keep going back/over my notes each time because I forget things, even the major things. For the majority of time, I had no responsibility when doing this. On the other hand, the FL has written whole books while also having a full-time job. Honestly, I just can't imagine her remembering everything she wrote over a couple of years since he wasn't the main character. So It would be understandable if she forgot or didn't realize the full extent of it.
Honestly, overall the whole situation sucks for both of them but they are working to improve it and I'm sure that in the end things will go well for them.
Some evidence from the novel/other stuff:
Chapter 1 page 10: "Even though he is a villain, a lot of fans like him" thus she did make him "evil" as you say she should have. In the same chapter he also pulled out a sword on a girl and stabbed the wall to threaten her.
Chapter 1 page 14: "I was a respected heir to the throne and you made me into an outcast" > "was" could be implying that this was before she started writing the story and thus the universe already existed before she started writing thus she has not created every detail of the world he lives in. Additionally, to support this point, the writer obviously didn't start the story at the point where they were born and seems to have started sometime between late teens to the adult stage thus we can also argue the idea that she did not control/set everything about the world. We can also see this by the fact that she didn't realize that those black squish monsters are a thing. But in this case, it's much more of a "things not going how she intended" type of thing.
Chapter 2 page 15: States that she has been an author for a couple of years.
Chapter 2 page 20: Evil face.
Chapter 3: Kiddnaping, imprisonment and physical abuse. It seems petty evil to me even if he had his reasons.
Throughout the novel: She can escape yet she sticks around and helps him out. I won't go from chapter to chapter but overall they both start by seeing each other as villains and develop a friendly relationship that is starting to turn into romance. Plus unlike the first few chapters, he seems like a better person in general, like he changed and so did she. Just compare chapter 1 them to chapter now them.
They aren't enemies so there is no need to pick sides.

I already know you dont agree with me and thats okay, i was saying thanks for not being rude and just expressing you opinion with what you think is right.
You have very good points and have made me overthink my pervious opinions.
Im not an author either, if anything im an artist. I create artworks using my emotions. I feel like thats why I can place myself within ML shoes and the main thing i really like about his charater is that he's experienced the awful stuff that is given to people while growning up and lost his innocence and thats why his charater is rough and edged. I also know the FLs character is suppoesed to, in a way, be a foil to his. The main reason why I will never really be able to emphasis with her character is because she reminds me of my old self. I was naive and childish and unfortunately some people just get a harsh reality check that life is not sunshine and rainbows. However, as privileged and as thankful as I am I do know what it feels like to have the world seemly be against you.
I know these feelings do not only reside in ML, but FL as well. The only difference is FL naivety has remained. FL throughout the story started off as a pushover and has turned into a Damsel in Distress. Although she has expressed some charistics of a strong woman. In the end she has become wishy-washy, like not knowing if she should go or if she should stay or if she has feelings for ML. She may act strong in front of ML, but when it comes to her favourite characters in the suspicious world she unknowly created, she doesn't seem to keep her guard up as much. Obviously as a writer the last thing you would expect is your noval to actually become real life but in this webtoon it did. When the story starts she has a normal reaction to the events that are occuring, but I had hoped that she would have taken these events and overcome it, not dwell hopelessly. As like any story the plot must go on and that is why they come up with a plan. I do like the fact that she stepped up when she has to fight the strongest woman in the Kingdom and only now is she really steping into the role as a FL, but she is still lacking. However thats how character development works... you cannot possibly say there is no faults in the way she is now.
I still empathize with ML because from his perspective he is living in his own world, not inside a novel and all of a sudden a being that he does not know switches his whole world upside down. If I was in his position I too would want to change my fate by all means necessary. While FL familiarizes herself with him, we see that he is not an evil person, he is just the antagonist in his brothers stories. No one likes being the villain, everyone knows that.
However I must say that opinions is strong emotions are much harder to be persuade.

So in other words, you are projecting your younger self on the FL?
The FL isn't naive nor is she a pushover. She got kidnapped yet kept her chin high. Plus she is pretty reasonable too with how she thought the logical thing when she first saw him and thought it was a crazy fan.
She is feeling very conflicted. She knows that she has to go but at the same time she has lived there for some time and honestly she seems to enjoy it far more than her regular life. But here is the thing, she can't just tell them that she changed her mind out of nowhere especially since that would bring up a lot of questions.
I also don't get how she is weak. She is pretty independent and has stepped into the battlefield. She has been stepping up for quite some time.
I empathize with him too, as he truly is stuck in a sucky situation but empathizing with him doesn't require hating her. He clearly got over his hatred for her and realized that she is not an evil witch that intentionally ruined the life of a living man.
It's good that you're finally being honest with yourself but it seems that you projecting your younger self onto the FL is making you unable to consider her situation. I can feel ya on that, I was pretty cringy before too (Like for lord's sake, just take a look at my username) and I do cringe at my past self.

Kinda but not to a strong extent and i dont necessarily hate her, like i wouldnt go out of my way to be mad about it. I just dont agree with some her main characteristics.
I know where youre coming from and i respect that. Maybe in the future ill come to like her character... but as of right now i dont and thats fine. Plus its not like im teeling everyone to dislike her, kinda just feel like she could be something more.
A great example of a female lead, that i really adore are: athy (who made me a princess), edna (light and shadow) and tia (abandoned empress). I really like then because they take matters into their own hands... maybe the reason why i like them is because they had a detestable person around... where as this webtoon doesnt really (i mean we've been introduced to the obvious antagonists but there hasnt been much progression).
Once again.... i hope i start to like the FL... but if i dont... no knows really going to care
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Plus i highly doubt youre too pressed either

Can i just... ughhh his friend is so annoying... like fucking leave min alone okay? Like if i had a friend like him I'd punch him by now... tells everyone and anyone my secret if he get something in return... like I know they've known Escher since forever but ughghh so anoyying and the brother(Prince) ffs you're annoying asf too (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸 (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸
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